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u got that line from crossroads didn't u? "i lost the baby. they make it seem like it was my keys or somethin" that was in the corny movie crossroads with britney spears. Ah well good story though

plz continue

Awesome!! I can't wait to read more, 0plese update asap!!!

I started reading this on fanfiction but then you put the link in ch 9 I think so I followed it here and finished reading this wonderful story on this site instead. Ok first off the first yaoi chapters that you did were really HOT!! I don't know how you managed to do that and it be your first time but I am throughly impressed. Oh and second I loved the story. Everything was perfect. The way Sora's attitude was a mixture of opptimistic and pessimistic was truely amazing. The way that you wrote him was...PERFECT. There really is no other way to describe your wonderful talents. How could you think you lost your zest for writing because this story is marvelous, one of the best I have ever read and I have a feeling that it will stay one of my favorites. Everything was just so awesome. I loved the fact that you built on Riku and Sora's relationship before any anst came. It made the sudden twist in their luck all the more bareable and in fact I loved the change, although, I worship the earlier and happier chapters. You plot twists and character description are amazing and every part of this story has been a joy to read. I am so glad that I decided to read it because it was everything I thought that it might be and so much more. You make reading worth each second I spent fighting to get on the computer. SImply wonderful. Sora's outlook on life is so different than what most people portray him as, and I love it. I can't get enough of this story and hope that you update soon. I guess I'm your newest fan and quite proud to join the many other people out there who probably silently enjoy your work. Fantastic job and please don't stop writing. Even though you believe that you have lost that ability trust me when I say it has only gotten better. You went from being simple amazing in ch1 to being absolutely perfect right now. Each chapter I read was so entertaining. CAN NOT WAIT FOR AN UPDATE!!! PLEASE UPDATE SOON THIS IS BRILLIANT!!!

Damn it! You take so long to update! I MUST know! You've got me highly interested! WRITE LIKE THE WIND I SAY! Best story I've read in ages. I loved the part where Sora got drunk, it was hilarious. SQUIRRL BOY! HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!

OH MY GOD!! This story rocks!! SQUEEEE!! please don't ever stop writing....ever....or i'll cry....and eat kittens...think of the kittens!

i love you too but i prefer guys so if youd get off me id appreciate it

I luffle the story and can't wait to find out what happens!!! So hurry up!! RAWR!! nah, you can take as much time as you want, as long as you finish it! Luff ya creative brain!!!

AWWW don't be depressed!! :fishes in bag and pulls out a giant chocolate chip cookie: =) This chapter is really good especially considering there wasn't any humor or sex in it. Poor sora....getting beat up like that by riku's insane stepfather(?). But that's crazy though...riku and erin's father is a crazed homophobe....that's a twist if i've seen one. well can't wait for the next chapter and i hope u get over you're depression :D

Oh my, Sora's gonna die o_O
Hmm.. Or not. Riku the hero boy, go and save him! *boogies*
And yeah, I love your fic. It makes me happy, sad, heated and angsty. All the same time. You rawks!