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by Alyx

person Moon_Shadow
schedule November 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Why must you keep torturing me with these cliff hangers?! *pouts* ........Meany!!!Update soon can't wake for the next chapter!
person Gremmlyn
schedule October 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
DUDE!!! PLEASE UPDATE!!!!!
person Gremmlyn the Otaku
schedule October 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMFG!!! Ansem is their father!!!! HOLY SHIT!! dude that was cruel leaving us on a cliff hanger like that. please update soon, this story is too awesome to leave as is.
person PLEASE UPDATAE
schedule September 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please update. >.<
person xmiso
schedule September 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
damn you! it was just getting good and now, you've left us wid a freaking CLIFFIE! DID YOU KNOW UR SUPPPOSED TO UPDATE REAL REAL FAST IF U LEAVE US WID CLIFFIES?! HUH HUH??? well anyways, i love your story. ^_^ i love it to death! its so cute and funnay.. pweeheehee. is sora gonna die? @.@; it'd be very dramatic if he DID DIE! pwaahahahhaa. but no, riku wouldnt be able to live widout him.. ^_^ update soon! its been like a month or sumthin..

mucho love-
and dont be depressed! your writings are fabulous. ^^
person xmiso
schedule September 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
and and.. im guessing that riku's father is ansem (gold eyes..eeek @.@) and he was married to riku and Ez's mother, but the mother had an affair with ansem's brother (sephiroth right!? RIGHT?! he has silver hair tew) and ez and riku were born from sephy! sephy is riku and ez's biological daddy right? ^_^ i'm so smart! I'M SO SMART! but if i'm wrong.. i'd feel very stupid.. -_-;
person robyn
schedule September 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hey i love the story it was freaking great i hope u write more to this one so i can read more
person Devious Paraselenae
schedule August 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
-bows to Theo for finally updating- It's short, but it will do. Pfah. -new reviewer- Try not to keep us hanging next time. -shakes fist at angrily- Oh well. I'm not THAT mad at you. I know how being depressed feels...

PS. Chocolate makes you feel happy. Try it! -holds up banner that says 'BUT THERE IS NO SPOON!!!'-
person MegaNeko
schedule July 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yes, yes, yes........ Aaaaaaaaand the next chapter?
I just looooove this fic!!!! Would be veeery nice if i could write like this too.... but i can't....sigh..... So i just go and write some lyrics for my band.... Some crazy whoodly-doodly-dooo-tralalaaaa-lyrics......like Deg's Zan (it's quite weird) ooor saku.
BUT HELL YEAH!!! That chapter??? I feel somekinda sorry for Sora....poor guy.... Ansem is..weeeeeeeelll..... A bit crazy, neh? But where is Sepiroth?? He's soooo f****** HOT!!!!*ahem* Anyway great fic <3 I had really great time reading it!! Keep it up, will ya?
*Hurry up, hurry up, wrist cut show
hurry up, hurry up, wrist cut show
no thank you, no thank you, good-bye* ...grrrhhhh....i just loooooove Dir en grey.....
person moonlight_wing
schedule June 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE YOUR STORY SO FAR >_< YOU MUST WRITE MORE!!!poor sora....*hug's him* hehe...anyway kairi is a total bitch!! i dont know what riku see's in her *slaps riku* moron....PLZ UPDATE REALLY REALLY SOON IM DIEIN TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS NEXT!!!!^_~