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for Diablo 2: Longing to be with you

by ladyjasmine

schedule December 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Valkyrie 2008-12-08 id # 3000034099
I loved it. Though my favorite character has to be Krysta... I really want to know if she meets back up with Avery!!!

I couldn't help but feel for poor Erix and Nevia. I just kept hoping that Rune would step over the line enough so he could be put down like the dog he is. Either that or him meeting his fate on the point of one of Krysta's katars.

The only problem I can see, is that you could've used a proof reader for some of this. The errors, while small, are noticeable.
person Anon
schedule December 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
end?
person @N0nyMU$
schedule August 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
keep it up
but next time dont put in so much smut in ur lemons
ur grammar sucks

person @N0ymU$
schedule August 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ps more more more
person Silver
schedule July 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great story
person Kite_the_Kitsune
schedule June 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Go Rune, Go Rune...
Get your freak on
Get your freak on
*Insert "Stewie's Doggy Style Jazz Beat" from Family Guy here)
person Noriar
schedule December 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow, great story ^^ I liked it really much so please keep writing more like this!