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September 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love you, and I love this. It's delicious, atmospheric, sways between dreamy and nightmarish so easily and beautifully, and it's just pulled off so well. You made me like Sebastian more than Kain, even, which is pretty damned impressive!
Yes. Total <3. Just one teeny error that bugged me which I have to point out (sorry... I'm a total ho-bag over these things >_<): "Sebastian kicked himself as he leapt to another rooftop, now was not the time to play shrink." I doubt Nosgoth would have psychiatrists, nevermind enough to give them the nickname 'shrink'!
But anyhow, that aside, this is delicious, and I'm going to have to read your Janos/Vorador fics (one of my favourite LoK couples ^_^) some other time when it is not 2:23 am in the morning ;).
Yes. Total <3. Just one teeny error that bugged me which I have to point out (sorry... I'm a total ho-bag over these things >_<): "Sebastian kicked himself as he leapt to another rooftop, now was not the time to play shrink." I doubt Nosgoth would have psychiatrists, nevermind enough to give them the nickname 'shrink'!
But anyhow, that aside, this is delicious, and I'm going to have to read your Janos/Vorador fics (one of my favourite LoK couples ^_^) some other time when it is not 2:23 am in the morning ;).
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August 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This story is even better than the first one! Keep writing! *rhetoric* I * I think I have a new favorite author! :)
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August 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Nice job! I liked the way you let Sebastian interact with Faustus and Marcus. You really hit each personality (hyperactive Faustus, silent Marcus, crazy Sebastian...) and I also admire the way you described the Sarafan Lord with his dry lips and the golden . I . I can't wait for Kain's arrival! *giddy with joy*
Update sooooooon!
Update sooooooon!