rate_review Reviews

I usually don't review (mostly out of laziness), but I will for this because this story is looking good! Ignore all the people that don't know an AU when they see it. Those people just get off on bothering good writers. Even if I'm the only one who wants it back (which I doubt, even without looking at the reviews beforehand), that's still a positive thing, right? I actually didn't think I'd like this pairing (or any pairing for this game to be honest XD), but it's starting to grow on me thanks to you. Please do more. :)

I like it, I think you should keep going if you have the motivation to do so.

Very interesting, I always had an odd thing for that pair. Keep it up.

Raihne! I love this story, please continue, onegai. It is so hard to find Legacy of Kain fanfiction and harder still to find anything decent! I have always loved your work [went by asahi yuy a looooong time ago sorry I haven't talked in awhile >< real life threw me curves too, and how is yer mum?] This story is simply delicious, and if I have to leave a review every day I will! Hope to see you get more work up posted here on AFF, and I still check the castle and message board religiously!

You remind me of myself, loosing interest because... reviews are not there. But it is.. beautiful. And I do believe you should go on. Take the encouragement you have and use it. Not all will say something..... And I have noticed that quite a bit. It does not matter for whom. I would.... greatly enjoy your story because I do rather like you plot. And I adore a good story with a good plot. I could go on but I do feel like I am rambling..... But should you wish it.... Come talk to me some time. I am sure I can..... Find more words for you and do so willingly.

I do so look forward to your... next update.

i love it ^_^pleaseeeeee update soon i want to know what happens next ^_^ ur doing a great job LOK is fav' game ^_^

Wonderful!! When i finished the last game i wished for someone to write a bit more about how it ended and this is really good work. Kain is quite IC and the idea of talking to his sword, i thought that he would as well after what happend hehe. Hope maybe u will continue? Let me know if u do. ^^

Although i also noticed that Raziel as a human wouldn't be able to meet w/ Kain, since he raised him after he had died and all, but who cares i think you can just put that you have a alter. universe going. Other then that i believe that Kain did act IC because he wasn't Raziel's enemy at the end and he didn't want him to go into the sword and so it wasn't like he wouldn't miss him in some way. ^^

You've had some upload problems that you need to go back over, I've had a few of these myself that need fixing, but otherwise I enjoyed it. You have a clear plot, a clear detination and I'd like to see more of it. I like the set up, placing Raziel at odds with the world in general from the outset.

I hope you pick this up again.

This take on their first meeting is very good and believeable. I can picture Raziel saying all that too ^^ And I've heard that Raziel had brown eyes before he got changed, not green.

I hope you plan a sequel with Raziel somehow returning.