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for Navi of My Dreams

by Yaoiboy

person Dragon_Sux
schedule June 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*Drools* Hm............................... I'll get a thesaurus to look up a nother word for good. * P.s: this is a good review*
person Roxanne
schedule May 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM

That was great, I love all the detail you put into it. Not many fic writers either have grammer errors or spelling issues, but not you, well I think there was one something to do with hands. sorry if you don't like this comment I tend to be picky about such things when I read fics, but compared to the many fis I've read by other writers you did great. Well sorry for babbling, but keep writing I wanna se what more you can do.

this wasnt a flame think of it as consructive criticism seriously I want to read more of your work


Roxy ~_<
person Sarah
schedule March 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was very nicely written. PWP's are normally cheesy and follow a set formula, but you managed to break the mold. Well done. ^_^
person Klepto
schedule December 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Aww! Poor Lan! I feel so sorry for the boy!

It's so hard to find this pairing. You'd think there would be more out there.
Anyway, more please! Onegai! *glomps*

>^_^<
MEOW!
person Nieni Springs
schedule August 17, 2003 at 12:00 AM

*drooling*.... That ending was just EVIL!

... I LOVE IT! It would be cool if you made this into a continuing story.... find some way for Lan to actually be with Megaman... *sighs longingly* Unfortunately, I've only found one or two stories that do that and they aren't written very well or descripively.

Anyhoo.... I enjoyed reading this!