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for The General's Daughter

by jadephoenix

person James Hanson
schedule January 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Greetings.

Just finsihed reading your story. It was most excellent. One of the best original charaters I've ever read in a SC fic. Little upset Ivy died. And why should she go to hell just because her father is evil? Always hated the concept of sins of the father being visited on the children. Besides, I've already read a pretty sick story about just that. Hope to catch the sequel soon.

Bye for now.



James Hanson
person Sniper Wolf
schedule December 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Brilliant story. The ending was pretty melacholy (Or however it's spelt) and a good way to end a good story :)
person Ethereal Autumn
schedule March 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
How can this story only have 3 stars?!! I rated again unlogged in, so now its 4. ^_^ But it is definitly a 5!
person teh authoress
schedule February 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*blushes more*

thank you...*cries*

*hides in closet cuz she has stage fright*
person Tetsuya
schedule February 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was very, very good. You covered the whole samurai mindset very well, although the Buddhist references seemed a little forced; more Zen or Shinto would have been more likely. But those are petty details; the writing style was great, the battles were covered very well, and although the characters besides Yuki were somewhat linear, the whole thing was tied together well. While reading this, I forgot that it was a story and just read - the highest achievement any story can reach with its readers. Well done.
person teh author
schedule February 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
'Tis finished...I suck at sequels...-.-;

*blushes*
person kenneth
schedule February 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
THIS STORY ROCKS.. but you need to finish it..
person Chrainaxoat143
schedule February 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
A very well-done story. Absolutely stunning and beautiful.
person teh author
schedule December 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
o...kay...it seemes to be randomly deleting letters...

Thank you; this story is aparently a favorite on my other site.
person BuriedMyselfAlive
schedule December 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Holy...this is probably the best story I have ever read. I'm not even joking, I was at the verge of tears at the end. You have my total respect, and this has inspired me to try to be as good of an author as you.