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May 22, 2017 at 12:00 AM
This was so fun to read. Thanks for sharing.
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May 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
MORE PLEASE!!!
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January 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This definitely has to be either the best, or one of the best Sonic fics on the site! Why haven't you made a sequel!? When I finished reading this, I tried to look for the sequel, but didn't find one.
Make a sequel! I command you to make a sequel! If you don't... well... let's just say you won't be able to walk safely in public anymore.
(Just kidding, but seriously... make the sequel already)
Make a sequel! I command you to make a sequel! If you don't... well... let's just say you won't be able to walk safely in public anymore.
(Just kidding, but seriously... make the sequel already)
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November 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
AW, HOW CUTE!
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December 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
cute....
i dont know wheither to be disgusted or amused :)
not bad though, feel free to update
lol
PEACE!
i dont know wheither to be disgusted or amused :)
not bad though, feel free to update
lol
PEACE!
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November 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
MAN KEEP IT UP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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September 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WONDERFUL Son/Amy story, the best one I ever actually read...I loved it! Definitely keep up the good work, it was too cute:)
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September 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*Claps* Nice story dood.
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February 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
As someone else has already pointed out, you have a few words that don't make sense, or seem out of place.
The rest of it is good, and I don't usually like the sappy stuff. That's another good thing about this piece, it doesn't go to far with anything, be it violence or mushyness. And Rouge being a freak never ceases to please me.
The characters I was familiar with (the ones from the video games) were in character. Something so rare amongst fan fiction that it's almost spooky to read. Congrats on that.
Is is just about the overall best piece of erotic Sonic literature I've ever read (haven't read too much, but most of it is so bad!), so please, keep writing.
The rest of it is good, and I don't usually like the sappy stuff. That's another good thing about this piece, it doesn't go to far with anything, be it violence or mushyness. And Rouge being a freak never ceases to please me.
The characters I was familiar with (the ones from the video games) were in character. Something so rare amongst fan fiction that it's almost spooky to read. Congrats on that.
Is is just about the overall best piece of erotic Sonic literature I've ever read (haven't read too much, but most of it is so bad!), so please, keep writing.
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June 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Good story, fairly well written... But you could have used a little more editing. I saw a few places where you used a word in the wrong context or simply missed a letter. But otherwise good. And the charecters didn't seem out of place at all.