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Oh my goodness.. I've been reading this fic from about 3:00am... it's now 6:30am. Granted, I'm a little tired, but this is the most original fic I've ever read... O_o; and considering how much I read in a day/week/month/year, that's saying a lot...

You've done a beautiful job creating a character for BHK, and I know this is a REALLY good fic because half of the time I'm rooting for Sora and Riku, and the other half I'm rooting for Sora and Dyne... I am truely torn as to who I want to root for... I'm seriously considering begging you for a 3-way to solve the delimma... lol.

Your writing is excellent... I think I only found one spelling error in all your chapters (and it isn't really an error... just a Brittish vs. American spelling thing). I'm very impressed, as most of the time I find a crapload of errors in stories... but yours is refreshing in both the fact that I don't have the urge to correct every other word, but I find myself wondering what is coming next.

Dyne's background...it's just so well plotted out, and you explain everything very well. I really look forward to your next chapter... this fic is absolutly wonderful! :)

...I didn't see that last chapter. >_> And now I feel incredably sorry for Riku... Dyne doesn't "love" Sora the way Riku does... arg. I'm fighting the urge to cry. It's early in the morning, blast it... anyhow. *points up* all that stuff still applies... I'm glad that Dyne got what he wanted... but now I just want things to turn out well for Riku. *sad* I look forward to your next chapter...

Wow. Just...wow. Let me start off by saying that I stumbled upon this story by complete accident, and I am extremely glad that I did. I will admit that I normally stick to a few certain fandoms whenever I read fanfiction, and Kingdom Hearts is not one of them. What you have done here is created an entire universe around your storyline, and you've done it thoroughly and completely. I cannot really say just how impressed I am. I'm not a fan of reviews that spew nothing but mindless praise, but this time I feel that I just can't help myself. I normally like to make my reviews constructive, so that they help the author...but the truth is that I feel that by reading this, I've been the one that's received help. THis story has helped to widen the expanses of what I thought fanfiction could be. I found absolutely no flaws in your story, the grammar is superb, your diction is an absolute delight to the imagination, and you have one of the most highly-developed vocabularies I've seen in fanfiction. I would go so far as to say that this is, without a doubt, the best written piece of fanficiton I've found to date. I don't claim to be a fanfic guru who's read thousands upon thousands, but I have been reading for many years now. Never before have I taken such a liking to an original character, or felt so deeply immersed in a story. I actually stayed up until 4 in the morning last night reading this, when I should've been studying for my semester exams. The way you characterized Dyne, and portrayed his emotions and feelings really let me connect with the character, and associate with his feelings, and that is a talent more rare than diamonds when it comes to writing. When it came down to the smexing, I was actually excited for the couple, and am slightly embarassed to admit that I've been rooting Dyne on ever since I caught on to the feelings he seemed to have for Sora. I looked forward to him getting the object of his desires, and was delighted when it came true. To sum it all up, I wanna thank you for sharing this piece. It's been an extremely enjoyable read, and it has hooked me like no other has yet to do. You've taken a world dimly illuminated in a video game and turned it into a working universe that fascinates the reader. I wish the best of luck to you in your writing endeavors, a fanboy-ish poke to update soon, and a congratulations for truly winning over a reader. I was tempted to say "They just don't write 'em like this anymore," but to be perfectly honest, I'm not sure they ever have in the first place.

Hi! I really like this fic, it's awesome! Are you ever going to update it? I hope so!

Very good. I like the developement and twists of the plot....please update soon!!

Happy, HAPPY day! Thank you so much for continuing with this story! It was such a nice suprise to find this story updated after not checking this site for months. And I adored this chapter, it was so HOT! *fans self* At first, I was really nervous for Sora and didn't think it would be the right time for Dyne and Sora to go all the way but by the end of the chapter I was convinced that it was the right time. Their love and affection really shines through and I love how from chapter one you let their sexual tension build up slowly. That's how stories are supposed to be! However, I am feeling dreadfully nervous for Riku. *cries* I can't wait to see what happens next!

I have been reading this fic over and over again. It is just so good. When I first read the summary I was a bit iffy on reading this but now I'm really glad I did.

When I read this, I picture Sora looking as he does in Kingdom Hearst II. When you described how he looked as from Riku's POV on Cloud's yacht...you got it right on the mark in my opinion.

I can't help but want to see more action with Axel though....Riku too... What makes me really happy as well is how you portray Kairi. You don't bash her or anything like that, in fact, you make her really likeable.

Your plot building is quite nice, I must say. The story is starting to pick up in speed without losing the reader's interest at all.

I hope this review makes up for all the other chapters I haven't reviewed. ^^;;

You left the fic off at a really interesting point. My curiosity is at its peak. I eagerly await the next chapter.

Oooh, poor Riku!! And man, dirty Sora for keeping to pictures on his _phone_. Geeze... Well, I can't wait to see out this works out! Update soon!!

update soon please? It's a very well written and a VERY good story ^____^

i am loving this fic, its amazing. im looking forword to the next update, i feel bad for Riku. i cant whait to find out what happens next. keep up the good work.