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January 20, 2014 at 12:00 AM
This story was so sweet and badass. You are definitely a gifted writer, Cold_Silence!
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January 4, 2013 at 12:00 AM
what a great story ! Though I didn't see any rikuX SoraX kiari in any chapter. Though I'm more for the yaoi but still I loved it a lot read in one night with my screen reader 75% of 100% did skip ch 1 because it was a bit slow to start.
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June 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Man, I'm in absolute LOVE with this fanfiction. I have never really thought of Roxas/Sora as a good raising but you have opened my eyes. This also happens to be my first Kingdom Hearts fanfic to read. I stand by my thoughts that you plot was, to put it simply, superb. I LOVE this and I am happy that you ended it as well as you did.
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May 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god... i'm suffocated with so many feelings right now... Yeah, i might be a late reader, but nothings too late.
That was one of the most touching, detailed, engrossing, heart-felt, heart-wrenchin stories I have ever read. There is probably only one or two that could match up to how I feel about this story. I'm still overcome, my lungs are filled with an intoxicaing fervor, and my mind is dazzled to what happens next. Every character's part is full and bright with meaning, the triangle and Soroxas relationship were full of complication but with a fufilled end... the climax leading up to the ending had me shredded in suspense and tears, and I NEVER cry when I read a fanfiction.
There's so much more I want to say, but I can't possibly list all the feelings I have for this fanfiction right now.
You're in my top 3 authors, i know its cliche, but its true, there are many authors whose long stories i've read and left unimpressed or unfufilled, but your story left me in the complete opposite- unfufilled in a way that my mind cannot possibly imagine the number of possibilities that it could've ended up, and believe me, thats a good thing.
I'll be stoked if you write something that has a part with this story. Be it an epilogue, one-shot, whatever, I also forgot to mention that SoraRoxas was my favorite pairing from the very start, and you've reminded me over and over again why it is.
Most of my friends are real bookworms, reading alot of complex, long books. They go from book to book, understanding the plot, knowing the ending, and moving on to the next, the last story pushed to the back of their mind.
Not so with this story. This story will haunt me in my dreams, I'll have fascinations of my own kind involved with this story, I'll constantly be looking out at the sky, picturing the certain scenes of this fiction. I'll sometimes believe this story is real, I'll want it to be real, I'll always wake up in the morning, looking to the side of my bed, searching for a Roxas cuddling with a Sora.
Everything was so well planned out, everything blended together so vibrantly, and ost importantly, it all connected at the end.
I hardly come across a fiction like this, ever (whichi've probably said dozens of times) my stomach churns, my heart yearns, and I can't get enough of it.
Fuzzy Love made my day.
Thank you.
That was one of the most touching, detailed, engrossing, heart-felt, heart-wrenchin stories I have ever read. There is probably only one or two that could match up to how I feel about this story. I'm still overcome, my lungs are filled with an intoxicaing fervor, and my mind is dazzled to what happens next. Every character's part is full and bright with meaning, the triangle and Soroxas relationship were full of complication but with a fufilled end... the climax leading up to the ending had me shredded in suspense and tears, and I NEVER cry when I read a fanfiction.
There's so much more I want to say, but I can't possibly list all the feelings I have for this fanfiction right now.
You're in my top 3 authors, i know its cliche, but its true, there are many authors whose long stories i've read and left unimpressed or unfufilled, but your story left me in the complete opposite- unfufilled in a way that my mind cannot possibly imagine the number of possibilities that it could've ended up, and believe me, thats a good thing.
I'll be stoked if you write something that has a part with this story. Be it an epilogue, one-shot, whatever, I also forgot to mention that SoraRoxas was my favorite pairing from the very start, and you've reminded me over and over again why it is.
Most of my friends are real bookworms, reading alot of complex, long books. They go from book to book, understanding the plot, knowing the ending, and moving on to the next, the last story pushed to the back of their mind.
Not so with this story. This story will haunt me in my dreams, I'll have fascinations of my own kind involved with this story, I'll constantly be looking out at the sky, picturing the certain scenes of this fiction. I'll sometimes believe this story is real, I'll want it to be real, I'll always wake up in the morning, looking to the side of my bed, searching for a Roxas cuddling with a Sora.
Everything was so well planned out, everything blended together so vibrantly, and ost importantly, it all connected at the end.
I hardly come across a fiction like this, ever (whichi've probably said dozens of times) my stomach churns, my heart yearns, and I can't get enough of it.
Fuzzy Love made my day.
Thank you.
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May 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
WTF?!??! I read this like . . . I don’t know how long ago . . . What’d you update?!
Ah, nevermind that, I’ll comment on this instead . . .
Yes, I loved this story, and no I’m not about to go gushing about it brainlessly. I liked the fact that it was so textured and layered. I was all set for Roxas to just stay on the planet, and then he finds the ‘Star Map’. I think I almost had a fit when you revealed his background story. No, scratch that, I did have a fit because Axel was perfectly CoM style Axel--and given the way he acts in KH II I’m almost convinced he’s bipolar.
I think the most meaningful scene in this entire story had to of been the spanking moment when Sora screams for Roxas to apologize for his father’s death and a moment later realizes what he’s done. Next most powerful scene is when Riku finds the phone and his reaction then as well as when he loses the race--they tie. Probably the moment that killed my heart was when Kairi drags Riku out of the dance and asks him where Sora learned to kiss.
Overall, I fully support not writing a sequel to this. For some reason, when I finnish some stories--not all, just some--I go into a minor depression. It mostly happened with really long stories that have been completed before I even start reading them, like this one. However, your explanation at the end helped, and I found myself not being depressed, but having my own idea of what comes next--happy things, because I’m a sucker for traditional comedies.
Oh, and I want to let you know, I’m going to do a fur!fic that has nothing to do with your story, but because of you, Sora and Roxas will be cat-boys in it.
Anyway, I thought the writing was good, but I’m glad to see that you’ll occasionally go back and reedit it. I can’t remember where, but I think in the last . . . 5 chapters I noticed grammatical issues more often than in the 1st 8 . . . but I digress. This was beautifully constructed. I can’t think of any plot-holes, all of your bases seem to be covered. Also . . . even though Roxas had a fandom personality . . . . . . I could see him acting like that. XD It’s somewhat funny, I’m incredibly new to the fandom--like a few months new--and I was thinking of using Roxas with this kind of tweaked personality in a odd collage!fic I plan on writing some day. . .
Okay, I’ll wrap this up by saying you did wonderfully well in this fic. It was emotional, it was . . . for what it was it was believable, like nothing felt forced, but that it all flowed naturally. And, I can safely blame you for shipping Sora & Roxas, but only in AUs. XD
I hope to see more from you!
Ah, nevermind that, I’ll comment on this instead . . .
Yes, I loved this story, and no I’m not about to go gushing about it brainlessly. I liked the fact that it was so textured and layered. I was all set for Roxas to just stay on the planet, and then he finds the ‘Star Map’. I think I almost had a fit when you revealed his background story. No, scratch that, I did have a fit because Axel was perfectly CoM style Axel--and given the way he acts in KH II I’m almost convinced he’s bipolar.
I think the most meaningful scene in this entire story had to of been the spanking moment when Sora screams for Roxas to apologize for his father’s death and a moment later realizes what he’s done. Next most powerful scene is when Riku finds the phone and his reaction then as well as when he loses the race--they tie. Probably the moment that killed my heart was when Kairi drags Riku out of the dance and asks him where Sora learned to kiss.
Overall, I fully support not writing a sequel to this. For some reason, when I finnish some stories--not all, just some--I go into a minor depression. It mostly happened with really long stories that have been completed before I even start reading them, like this one. However, your explanation at the end helped, and I found myself not being depressed, but having my own idea of what comes next--happy things, because I’m a sucker for traditional comedies.
Oh, and I want to let you know, I’m going to do a fur!fic that has nothing to do with your story, but because of you, Sora and Roxas will be cat-boys in it.
Anyway, I thought the writing was good, but I’m glad to see that you’ll occasionally go back and reedit it. I can’t remember where, but I think in the last . . . 5 chapters I noticed grammatical issues more often than in the 1st 8 . . . but I digress. This was beautifully constructed. I can’t think of any plot-holes, all of your bases seem to be covered. Also . . . even though Roxas had a fandom personality . . . . . . I could see him acting like that. XD It’s somewhat funny, I’m incredibly new to the fandom--like a few months new--and I was thinking of using Roxas with this kind of tweaked personality in a odd collage!fic I plan on writing some day. . .
Okay, I’ll wrap this up by saying you did wonderfully well in this fic. It was emotional, it was . . . for what it was it was believable, like nothing felt forced, but that it all flowed naturally. And, I can safely blame you for shipping Sora & Roxas, but only in AUs. XD
I hope to see more from you!
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January 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
lucky that i could read the whole thing in one go, otherwise i would've been rolling on the floor waiting for the next installment. your style was light and easy to read and without the usual cliche vocabulary there is so much of around here. the characterisation of sora, kairi and riku really impressed me, especially kairi because i found myself understanding her position in their group friendship more and liking her (in the game i just dismissed her because she seemed girly and annoying). you also showed another side to riku, and now my only regret is that riku didn't make it with sora. that scene between them on the cruise-ship was so believable it was unsettling (but in a good way).
dyne... i liked the crazy things he did, and his smart-ass attitude, but it just wasn't roxas to me. still, i got hooked into the story more than i thought i would, which is always a good feeling.
oh, and your cid-as-soccer-coach won several internets *grin*
dyne... i liked the crazy things he did, and his smart-ass attitude, but it just wasn't roxas to me. still, i got hooked into the story more than i thought i would, which is always a good feeling.
oh, and your cid-as-soccer-coach won several internets *grin*
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October 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Super Great storie you should make another storie when it is dyne before he met sora like when he was on his home planet or when he was born I think it might make a pretty good story I hope you might consider doing it if not it's okay. I really like dyne being a cat sense I love cats It was funny and totally great idea I also liked the parts when dyne talked about him and sora having kittens. Keep up the good work. :D
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August 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow, you did an outstanding job on your fanfic. The characters were right on the dot, no one was over the top or anything. The plot was great, it had some nice twists to it especially the ending, I wasn't expecting that. It was bittersweet, but I can't imagine the fic ending any other way. Bittersweet, I guess that's how first loves should be. Anyway good job.
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August 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This was a GREAT story...
You should write an alterante ending to what would happen if Sora did go w/ Roxas at the end^_^
You should write an alterante ending to what would happen if Sora did go w/ Roxas at the end^_^
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August 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You finally updated!!! and the story is DONE! This story is awsome!!! okay I'm done, but really I really like this story.