rate_review Reviews

This is so damn awesome. Seriously. Keep going. It seems like you're a novice from your writing style, but you make the characters progress much better than most novices do. Rebecca is hesitant, but you remark that she can see she's powerful and then she starts to be attracted to that. However, Lyn, though she is aroused, is not happy about any of the events that transpire, and you make that very clear. I think you have a lot of potential. Please keep writing.

PLEASE ADD MORE

make more and mix Ephidel with other FE games not just this one.

sometimes i wondor what kind of people visit this site lol....i mean theres a bunch of game boy game fics
and were all (supposedly) adults here...although i gotta admit i liked ephidel in this fic. sounds like what he would do in the game
if nintendo didnt have a consience. get this: fire emblem, rated AO lol...the first game boy game in history for adults only.
any ways... yeah nice fic i had fun reading it. you dont give enough credit to nergal... hes like 500 years old and hes been sucking off quintessence for like ever...so hed be like indestructable to even ephidel. MAKE EPHIDEL RAPE HECTOR!!! thadbe so funny...
yeah anyways great fic....those dont come around all the time

please continue!

this was a crazy story...continue to write more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
GREAT DETAILS!!!!!!!!!!!

Damn! Ephidel is one lucky bastard. I wish I was him.

Yay! you updated again! this was good and I hope you updated again soon

I'm glad you updated but if you are going to take this long you could at least make the chapters a hell of a lot longer update very very soon

Can you also include Matthew's girlfriend? the one who got killed by Jafar? shes pretty hot too