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August 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well other then the fact that I really don't like this couple and I have no idea what's going on this is pretty good. Also, I don't think that Jr. would have to bring chaos' dick down to him. I think it would be the other way around because chaos is the taller one.
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August 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Loren, you consider a twenty-something in the body of a 12 year old fucking an android with the mentality of a 12 year old normal? Are you on drugs?
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January 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I am sick of the m/m fics, con someone, please, do a normal paring, mabey jr/momo?
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January 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I totally love this story!! You are updating soon... right?? chaos and Rubedo!! They're so sweet and this fic is so original!! UPDATE PLEASE!!!
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December 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey there... nice story so far... I've read it quite a few times... I really like it... one question tho... where to the Red eyes come from??? Oo is that part of chaos changing or something??? Anyway... don't stop here... I want to read more...
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October 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WEEE cool story I love chaos and Jr, write more please,!!!!( I always thought Jr and chaos should be together!)
They are both totally HOTT!!!!!
They are both totally HOTT!!!!!
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July 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Excellent story! Here's a review :)
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June 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awwwwwwwwe maaaaaaan! I really would've liked it if you would have done sumthing with Tony and chaos. Gawg=d that would of been hott! So far, I think itz great. Plz continue.
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March 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Whoa, I wouldn't have expected this to work but it does. Interesting and very sexy in a dark way. nice work
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February 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
So i'm your first reviewer after this long, you're lucky it's a really polite and nice person who checks out everything she/he likes or else i wouldn't have found this fic. It's really good, probably my favorite that i've found in aff.net since i started browsing around a couple of weeks ago. if this fic's not finished please finish it. i'd really apreciate it! A great work like this shouldn't go imcompleted! But one thing did bug me, i'm not so sure but if Jr. or Rubedo, if he's being evil then i don't like that. He's my favorite character and i hate it when they make cool characters like that be bad and evil, because i'm a goody goody (so speaking) and i don't like bad things like that. Very good and i hope you find it in you to finish this story, it doesn't have to be long, just completed.