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for Price of Friendship

by Legacy

person PikaBot
schedule March 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG. STICK WITH ONE VOICE PLEASE. Switching from first-person the third-person and back again is confusing, and poor writing.
person Revelation
schedule October 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Seriously hope there is going to be more, this is so well written and chalkfull of gooey dark angst. This is actually the second time Ive read it since a while back, I hope it can be updated eventually, *sniffle* poor sweet Lucca
person The Forbidden Chidori
schedule August 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
^^ Very good. Marle/Crono is such a boring combo, its in the game but it's still boring, so this is quite intruiging. I do not like the word 'cum' but all-and-all, your wording was perfecto. Do not take my little word blurt there. >.< I'm just being picky.
person bloomoonwatcher
schedule June 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow ^_^ really a great Lucca POV, it's just the way she would have said it too! Marle is evil, proposing a party 20 minutes after Lucca almost gets raped. Lucca should SO keep Crono.
person Akaji
schedule June 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow... Poor Lucca, she's my favorite CT character too... And I do find crono/lucca as a good pairing as long as they aren't kids when they're paired =P

But wow, those are some nicely done nightmares. Hehe, I enjoy writing a good nightmare. <.< >.>

Please write more, you are awesome! *gets a stadium of people together to give applause*