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WOOOPS,forgot to put my name on top, the ano up there is mine>.<

This is so cool! I love the idea, brought on by the water-level of KH no doubt. I can't wait for you to update, i really hopw you keep going with this ifc!!!

I sended you the wrong date. Sept 15, 2005. Don't wan't to spoil what this means,but I know that you know what I mean.

i say you go with C or maybe i'll be greedy and want all of it i dont know but i love you story i was so into it i missed lunch oh well. Great story keep up the good job

Well... I really like learning about Leon and Cloud's history... though you kinda have me confused. ^^;; I'm not sure where the whole Kairi and Dad thing is going, but I think you should keep it up... adds a little perspective to the fic, ne?

Umm... *is trying to remember whae doe doesn't/does like*

It would be cool to see a little more of Selphie... maybe as a bit of a matchmaker??? And having Sephiroth in here would be soo neat!!! I'd love to see how he fits into the whole story...

Umm... as for a choice... "A Moment" for Riku and Sora would be cool...

I really love what you're doing with this... and thank GOODNESS you're not doing this in Atlantica... I think I've had enough of Ariel... *remembers how useless Ariel was in the game* Blech... Anyway... I love the fic... and I can't wait to see what everyone's chosen!!!

Yaye! Another chapter!! I love this story!!! Yes, I'm gonna be a "greedy bastard" and say E!!!! Please? *big chibi eyes* Neeways! Update soon, please?

Oy! -pouts- When are ya goin to update? The waits driving me nuts.

Hello!!!!! totally luuuuuuuuv this fic^__^ I want all of the above!!! And yesh I am very greedy for this ficXD. Ya ne!!

I could proof read for ya! lol Ill read it over 3 times, plus, I have word document, it shows me any spelling errors or grammar mistakes, so bonus there eh? lol I really love your story its so damn creative lol. I wish I had a brain as big as yours... -_- Unfortuneatly, I head butted my locker one to many times pretending it was heartless with my friend o_O;; lol I find myself coming back here everyday to see if youve updated lol. You know, I have one extremely stupid question. How are they suposed to...you know...make woopie lol. I was thinking about that and it really got me. Either I dont know a helluva lot about fish...or Im just stupid. There you help me with that, and Ill help you with the whole puncuation thingy! ..No, Im too lazy to proofread this to impress you ahh.ahh. Oh yea, and Im a greedy, ALL OF THEM!! Muwahahha!!

~Mel

Ps. I have a question, which you dont and probably wont answer cuz of the whole SURPRIZE thingy in the story, but if Sora gets caught, and stuck in a huge Aquarium...wouldnt he just bash into walls (glass)...Because you know, birdies..windows...^^;; Anyways...Have fun with trying to figure out how Sora and Riku are going to make woopie...because...I dont know ^^;;l and if you do...your a cruel person for not tell me how *sobs*

I say E, and this story is great! I say you definitely keep going it's really caught my interest