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by AoiNikko

person hehe
schedule April 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
If you don't continue I will slap you with my mermaid tail. No lie. CONTINUE DAMN IT!
person hehe
schedule April 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Sorry for double review. (what's so bad about that?) But anyways, I choose... A and B and D. ^^ C is sort of... I don't know random? It's just not as appealing to me. Well, anyways, HURRYYYY!!!
person Dee
schedule April 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Aw, this is such a good story! But, I wish Leon and Cloud were together Sephiroth scares the shit out of me! May that be the fact in the story he technicially eats other people... but, that's not the point. *eyes shift* Anyways! As I was... or am, or ... whatever *shakes head keep up the great work! Peace Out! ^_~V
person Lycole
schedule April 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Aw, I love this fic!! Hm... choices... I'd like to think Riku isn't stupid enough to make a deal with Sephiroth, but... Well, let's face it, he's done things like it in the past. I think Sora telling Cloud would just make things bad for Sora. But Wakka meeting a merperson would be really really awesome! And you can tell us the story of Daisuki's, I'd like that very much.
Please keep it coming as fast as you can write it!!!
person Kili-chan
schedule April 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
AWWW!!! this is the best fic everrrrr!!!X3 its so unique and original!! you just gotta keep reaing! hmm. . . but what to vote for. . . what to vote for?? i saaay either C or D!! whaha!! update soon!! ^o^ w00t!!
person dusk
schedule April 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This story is fantastic! *Bounces happily in chair* It just gets better and better! Riku and Sora are so sweet and I love how you characterize them both. Plus the tension between Cloud and Leon could be cut with a knife, I'm anxious to see where they're going. Keep up the great work and update soon! P.S. I pick D! I love this Daisuki idea you've created. It really makes this story special and unique!
person Jou-pup
schedule April 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story. The concept is nice and it's the first mermen/maid Kingdom Heart fic that I've seen that doesn't include Ariel (yet). Not that there are many mermen fic in the Kingdom Heart section... (no fish love) I like the pairings, but I really would like to see Tidus getting paired up. Sadly, I like to see him paired up with Wakka but Wakka is a human.-_- So maybe I could suggest someone that makes everyone gasp in horror and that I have yet to see in any Kingdom Heart fanfics : Seymour!!!!!! XD (I wonder why he's never used, maybe because he's a total bastard?)
Anyways, I won't bore you with more ramblings. I choose C most of all. Mainly because I think Sora shouldn't tell Cloud all about Riku yet, specially if Riku accepts Sephiroth's plan. (not like he can't I bet Seph will eat him if not) Storytime will be nice too, there might be more Tidus time. Yay Yay Tidus! =P
person Ryo
schedule April 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay, you updated! I really like this story. ^_^

As for the voting, I pick both A and B. Drama's good, and making deals with the Devil are fun.
person kupo
schedule April 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
For a while i thought u stopped writing. This was awesome!! Do A not D ! AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA and don't forget PICK A!!!
person Cerra-chan
schedule April 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Woot! ^^ This chappy's awsome! ^^ Just keep continueing to write more, kk? I mean like, now. XD