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eeeeeeee! where's the rest? Why aren't you updatin?

So... everyone who leaves a review can vote for what happens next? Alright!

I REALLY like how Leon tries to cope with the fucked up situation with Cloud. You´ve got me a tiny little bit confused here though. Cloud doesn´t know ´bout Leons feelings, right? While they were yelling at each other there was this point where Cloud said “Yes, that’s true, but at least I didn’t choose a Daisuki that hated the very water I swam in.”. Could you enlight me about that? Does Cloud think Leon named someone his Daisuki, does he know about Leons feelings for him or was it a mistake on your part? I´d like to see how things turn out between them.

On the other side the relationship between Cloud and Sephiroth adds a whole drama to your story, BUT. I. DON´T. LIKE. SEPHIROTH. TRIEING. TO. EAT. SORA. AND. RIKU!! *breathes heavily and advances on Sephiroth ready to stangle him in a slow and painful way*
So plea~se don´t let Riku make a deal with him! Dammit, he and Sora just got nearly KILLED by Sephiroth it´s just unnatural that he makes a deal with their would-be-murderer. And for the 'problem', why doesn´t Riku simply migrate with Sora? The Dorsalbacks could need some more protection and Riku being strong and all (allright, maybe not yet, but he WILL be! ^.~) could provide it.

I like the idea of Sora telling Cloud about Riku. How would Cloud react knowing it? Would he still forbid Sora to see Riku while he himself knows the pain of having a Daisuki and not being able to see him? He could also help Sora realize his feelings. If you put in some more drama with Cloud acting strict and 'evil'-even if he only wants to save Sora from the pain he felt- then HELL YES that´s totally fine with me! I love Drama... as long as it has a happy end and I don´t have to wait too long for it. *nods*

Also again: I vote for B because I love Drama and it could also lead the story to Clouds own Daisuke and the situazion with Leon, AGAIN. I just hope you bring those two together, not that I have anything against Sephiroth in general, I just don´t like how he acted so far in this story. *turns around with a scary light in her eyes and gets ready to strangle Sephiroth again* Huh? I´m not allowed to kill him, ´cuz you still need him in the story? Okay... but only till its finished! Muwhahahahahahahahahaaaa!!!

I´m totally against A ´cause like I already said it would be illogical and downright stupid on Rikus side. I also don´t like it if things get too messed up and then I´m sitting there crying/fuming (and getting ready to hunt you down!!) in front of a cliffy. Like. Right. NOW.

I think D with all you wanted to know a great idea but I would be very disapointed if you do a whole chapter just with this instead of continuing with the real story. I´M GREEDY, TOO! I want more chappies! *wails* I NEED more plotfilled chappies!! *notices her emberassing behavior and coughs* Er... Anyway... you could put parts of it at the end of every chapter. This way you´d also be sure people read your ABs.

I don´t really aprove of C, mainly because I don´t see what good it would do to your plot. I mean, Wakka is already on the mermaids side, though mainly because of Cid and auron. ^^ One of the previous choices though, of Kairi going diving, getting into trouble and being saved by a mermaid could really help her in realizing that they´re not 'only animals'. Pffft. That so full of herself bitch! I don´t like her, so why not letting her meet Sephiroth? *snickers evilly* Of course that would only have her and a lot of other people that mermaids are not only primitve but also dangerous.
... *thinks this through again* You know... you could do that after (I´m asuming it WILL happen) Sora and Riku got captured. Shu as Kairis father would surely be angry and weary around them. Would he be cruel to them? Would he trie to kill them?! OOOOOOOOOh... I worship the Drama and the Angst! (As long as you don´t leave me with clifffies... just reminding you... ^.~)

Now to end this long and rambled and surely confusing review I want to say I like your story and hope you continue soon or I´ll have to hunt you down for this cliffy! (insert gulp from your side here)

Keep it up!

^^ Flidar *winks*

Wow, this has to be the best fic I've ever read really. I have tried to think of something that you could do to improve, but I keep coming up with blanks. It's already put together so well I really don't know how you could improve it. I love the Sea frazes you put in there like "dried kelp on a black beach." I was wandering if you were going to put Ansume in there somewhere thou. Maybe he could be another Razerfin or maybe a traveling, skilled fisherman after mermaids that happens to come to the Islands? As for A, B, C, or D thing I think you should choose since your doing it so well, but if you need an answer to that question I would have to say C and D with a little bit of A. Keep up the great work! I can't wait to see what happens next, please continue writing on this fic. ~Tara~

I want more story umm yeah I chose A. So go write more now please.

So far I love your story (fanfic) thank you so much for taking the time to write it and the time and guts to share it. Please update soon, and as for the choices plz don't use A(riku makes a deal with seph) In my opinion(sp?) you already have enough drama that might be to much. Making it annoying any of the other 3 sounds like they would work well though. Anyways thats what i think. Thanks again and pease please please update soon. [signed] Loki

I'm really into this story, it's got a nice flow to it. And unlike other fan fiction, I've read this a few times already. The only this I could see to change is adding a little less about the 'humans' in it. Not take them out, they add alot, it's just not as interesting.

Guineus i love it especially the part when riku and sora gets to gether this is the best story iv read so far.

That was the best story i've read so far keep writing or i'll keep sending you emails to keep writing i did it befor.

OMG A I seriously like your story and right now im at the end of chapter 3 i gots to read more

I really like this fic so far. I haven't gotten a chance to do reviews for the other chapters but I really like this fic so keep going.
I like choice letter (A)
I really want to read more!