rate_review Reviews

It's taken me forever to find this story again!
I never knew it was here though. I read it once a long time ago when it was on
a site that had a blue or green background.
Hey! It'd be great if you could continue writing it. Now that I know where it is
I'll read it again! ^_^

Oh yeah, xD I completely forgot to put my choice.
I'd like the story time one (D).

I first read your story a long time ago and i lived it, i just now went back to read it again. I really really really wish you'd finish it! please dont let it die! its too good for that, and you left off at such a suspensful place! i want to know what happens! Please?

The story is really good. I thought I should point out that I think the end of chapter 2 is missing. I emailed you about it but I thought I should put it in the review as well. Chapter 2 ends with them just getting to Selphie (without giving us her name) and by the start of chapter 3 they are talking about Leon and he hadn't been introduced, it kind of confused me. At first I thought maybe it was a time skip thing where the author would tell you what had happened later as though the character was thinking about it or something, but then that didn't happen and I'm really curious as to what happened. And wow that was probably a really long run on sentence, sorry about that. Well anyway really good story I hope you get around to updating, oh and my choice for the choice thingy-thing is C and maybe B just because that would be interesting to see.

... hi... ehm, I know this is the first time I'm reviewing this, but I just came across it very recently. Anyway, so far I'm loving it, but that's no surprise, I love all your other fics too. :)
That Daisuki thing is quite scary, it probably is a bless and a curse, although when feelings as strong as those are involved, things ought to be difficult...
Are Cid and Auron together 'together'? I've been wondering for a while, because they live together and they are both "fathers" to Wakka, but that doesn't need to mean anything... Maybe it's been hinted and I haven't quite grasped it, or maybe I'm just reading where there's nothing, but, oh, well...

About the choice... Wakka is a fun enough character, I would like him to meet a mermaid, and that would probably get the plot running quicker, right? Because for Kairi's father to finally trap a mermaid, Wakka first needs to befriend one, right? How is the trapped mermaid going to get free without some human help after all? :D
However, deep down what I really want to know is exacly what's exactly cooking inside Sephiroth dangerous little mind... And knowing Riku, he'll fall for it.

Anyway, update soon if you can. :)

You haven't updated in so long. *Sniffs.* I need to see if fics are finished when author has been gone so long. Cursed curiousity.
Also, you may want to check chapter two. I think it cuts off in the middle since we didn't see Leon save Selphie or even see introductions.

I feel for Riku. Poor kid. Though, angst is always good. Spy Wakka is also amusing. Shu I think is very...ignorant I suppose is the only thing you could call it as well as Kairi. Sephiroth is good too. I'm not really sure if I want Cloud to go with him or not. Leon I feel sorry for to. To have the one you love hate you is said. Not sure what I can say to improve except for the weird grammar things that seem to happen so often on this site. You know the whole "But"But thing. It was in your chapter, so I remember it. For choices....I actually want them all to happen because Sephiroth plotting is always good, Cloud being a parent is amusing, someone needs to meet a merperson already, and I want to know the whole story about Daisuki's already! Um, yeah. Hope you update! ^_^

Hi!
I really like your story, it´s the first time that I read a KH-merpeople-AU. ^^ A big YAY! for the cute Riku/Sora-Scene in the
last chapter, but you know, I hate Sephiroth. ^^" I can´t help it, I know he´s damned hot, but character-wise... And since
I´m a huge Leon/Cloud fan that only adds to my dislike for Sephiroth.

I´m curious about what Wakka meeting merpeople, do they even speak the same language?
As for our choices, I´d like to see the ides B) and C) carried out. ^^

And please, NO friendliness between Sephiroth and Riku, and no deal either... >.< I really don´t like that guy and besides,
I think it would be unfair on Sora.

Bye and keep up the good work ^.^

Shiruy

To be honest this is the first time I have read the story. I love it. Usually merpeople stories are lame and using KH charcters, i had my doubts. However, I read read it and I am very empressed. Yoai is always awsome, but you have really thought the plot through. I do hope you update this story soon, because I really want to see what happens with Seph.'s plan and will Riku go along with it. Good luck. ^.^

2nd choice about sora telling cloud about riku and I wonder if you're so busy with school that it's difficult to have enough time doing this fanfic...

I know you probably forgotten all about Pisces but I wish you would write a new chappie!!! PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!