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June 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
So far I think this is a very good story and I think you should up-date very soon.
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June 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow great story, I have it on my favorites, so please keep writing. I vote for A.
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May 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i suggest A and then C.
and then Riku can save him!
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and then Riku can save him!
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May 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
It's me again. I reviewed your other fic, and now as I said, I'm reviewing this one. I'm surprised with this one. I usually don't read AU's but this one is great. You have alot of detail in this and I can picture everything! I can just imagine all of them swimming around, and playing games. I love how you described the packs too. You show a lot of creativity in this fic.
As for the choices, I vote for A and B. "A" because I really want to see Sora be a rebel and join the other pack, and get into a lot of trouble (nothing too bad though). "B" because, well, if he was to do "A", he would eventually run into Riku anyway. I really can't wait to see Sora and Riku together again. They are so cute and I'm curious to see what Riku will do to get Sora. I'm wondering what kind of danger he is willing to put himself into, for Sora.
I would also love to see more of Cloud and Leon. I really like them as a couple, although it seems that they are ex's in this one. I love seeing how two stubborn, bull-headed, people can get along well enough to actually love each other. I hate how some people put Cloud with Aeris. I don't like her. I also don't like Selphie or Kairi. Although I don't mind the Tidus/Selphie pairing. They do seem to be perfect for each other.
I'm not really sure what to suggest for events or things like that for you to put in your fic. I would love to help, but you seem to have a better imagination than I do. I usually stick to more realistic things, like keeping them as humans. You are really creative, and I think you don't need my help. If you ever do though, I'll try my best ^.~
Anyway, I've written enough. I can't wait to read more of this awesome fic.
Twinstar1 ^.~
As for the choices, I vote for A and B. "A" because I really want to see Sora be a rebel and join the other pack, and get into a lot of trouble (nothing too bad though). "B" because, well, if he was to do "A", he would eventually run into Riku anyway. I really can't wait to see Sora and Riku together again. They are so cute and I'm curious to see what Riku will do to get Sora. I'm wondering what kind of danger he is willing to put himself into, for Sora.
I would also love to see more of Cloud and Leon. I really like them as a couple, although it seems that they are ex's in this one. I love seeing how two stubborn, bull-headed, people can get along well enough to actually love each other. I hate how some people put Cloud with Aeris. I don't like her. I also don't like Selphie or Kairi. Although I don't mind the Tidus/Selphie pairing. They do seem to be perfect for each other.
I'm not really sure what to suggest for events or things like that for you to put in your fic. I would love to help, but you seem to have a better imagination than I do. I usually stick to more realistic things, like keeping them as humans. You are really creative, and I think you don't need my help. If you ever do though, I'll try my best ^.~
Anyway, I've written enough. I can't wait to read more of this awesome fic.
Twinstar1 ^.~
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May 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I'd agree with A and B... just because, c'mon. Two being better than one and all that.
I like the new take creacreativity going on here, actually. It's new and different without being "What the hell happened here?!" Lots of "mysterious dangers" going on... I bet that makes for a lot of fun situations. Heh heh.
I like the new take creacreativity going on here, actually. It's new and different without being "What the hell happened here?!" Lots of "mysterious dangers" going on... I bet that makes for a lot of fun situations. Heh heh.
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May 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I would pick:
B) Sora runs into Riku again
I like the flirting part, as you can tell I'm a crazed yaoi fangirl. Anway I really like the fic, the whole thing, it's really imagintive.
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B) Sora runs into Riku again
I like the flirting part, as you can tell I'm a crazed yaoi fangirl. Anway I really like the fic, the whole thing, it's really imagintive.
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