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Hey great story I love it please contiune. Tee Hee Cloud is pissy. Anywho I KairKairi goes Scubadiving cause that would be intresting to see what happens next. Or maybe the Razorfin attack. But if it's Kairi Scubabdivinsuggsuggest that it be Sora sence he's curicurious one.

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Awesome fic! I can't resist Merboy action :p I have searched and searched and this is the first I've found! Anyway, I vote for the Kairi scubaing senario, ideally stumbling upon our main merboys in their, uh, position :p

*Moan* That was way to short for my taste...It was that or probably the stupid cliff hanger you put at the end of a very nice chapter *glares* Anyway, I'll have to go with choice A, since I like Cloud/Squall and you didn't really explain things clearly execpt fot the small rumors and stuff I hardly know anything about those two bishies' story...So, A is it...even though I like SoraRiku fluffiness better ^^

Well, I'd have to say a cross between A and B. Have him looking for Leon, and run into Riku. Then they both go off.

As for the review, well, there's nothing to critique really. xX; Your spelling's fine, tenses, all that. I do like your style. You offer enough desc. to give a picture, but don't overwhelm the reader with too many images. ^^-

Sugei! that was reallly really good! Please update as fast as you can maybe you could put alittle Sora/Leon action along with Sora/Riku? Pwease! *Gets adorable chibi eyes*

Hey that was AWSOME please contiune I want to know what happens next even thought "we" get to deside. for me I would say B A then D...... maybe a funny C blooper at the endn of the whole story just for laughs. Anywho Hurray No KairixSora. so far you added lots of the KH characters does that mean you're going to add Sephiroth Yuffie or Aries heck even Ariel cause well she is the mermaid. Anywho keep up the good work. I LOVE it.
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Oh oh oh that was sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo cool please contiune I really really really really want to know what happens even though you gave us choices I still want to know what happen if it was Sora meets up with Riku again what would happen oh oh oh pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeease contiune.

Oh I forgot are you going to put Sephiroth in this story cause that would be wickedly sweet.

THIS STORY KICKS ASS..... I love it I cant' express how much I love this story no words can. Great info on the mer people. Hey is Sephiroth going to be in the story maybe he can like cause trouble for Sora or even Cloud have him be like one of the types that dont' fit what they are... I'm not making any sence am I anywho.... Add Sephiroth make him maybe like get Sora cought when it happens later on in the story. Have a Leon/Cloud thing too don't have them hate each other for ever....is Ansem going to be in as like one of those Razor dudes. Cause you kind of made them seem like Heartless so I figure he would be in there some time and be that kind of mer person... Love that you made sure that Kairi couldn't be "with" Sora cause I HATE her. Anywho out of the choices I say go B then A then C take your time getting to the capture part though but with out dragging the story through senless boring stuff. OH is there going to be lemons? Cause I do know how you can have them be "Lemony". If you want to you can contact me though DragonSlayer496 AIM. although I do share this with other people so*shurgs* Anywho keep up the good work.