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I pick E, becuase i'm greedy..

I don't really understand the Daisuki thing between Sephy (I am to lazy to spell out his whole name), Leon, and Cloud. I understood that Cloud is Sephy's Daisuki... So Leon is Cloud's Daisuki?

The reason am confused is becuase.. Cloud was telling Leon that Sephy was his Daisuki. But then when Leon left, he said "You'll never catch him, my Daisuki." So I am a little confused.

i luv the story so far!!! *.* keep up the good story plot!^^ hope 2 c the 5th chapter up soon.

I didn't know non-members couldn't review...yay! I would've reviewed a looooong tome ago ;__; I'm sorry. You deserve praise. This has to be one of my favourite stories. The way that you describe the mermaids and their habits and all that...it makes me want to write fanfiction to your fanfiction; it's that pretty! *love* Well, anyway, I vote for option E because I'm a greedy bitch. :D Hope you write more soon! ^__^

I would like to be your beta cause i think this story is great but i couldn't send an email to your adress so maybe you could email me, if you dont already have a bthatthat is

LOL! This is gettin great Sephy's in the pic now, grins* Update soon please! Also for yes I'm quite a greedy person so I choose 'E'.

very cool story ^^ i looove it lol and i would sooo love to see A) RAZORFTTACTTACK!!! (This leads to more Cloud/Leon backstory) i soo cant wait for the next update


~Manda~

*glomps* Helllooo~ you sexy writer. Awesome job on the story! I love it! Very creative and I've never read one like this. I love it so much!! Write moreeeee! Please! Update!

I think this is a good story and I am looking forward to it's completion, as for my choice i'd like to see B) Kairi scuba diving

OMG! This story is so cute! You have to continue soon!

Well I really don't like Kairi at this moment...she's like some selfish human wanting to see another creature that didn't do anything to her...and the mer'maid' would probably die again if they captured another one....kind of mean. But humans are like that aren't we...always wanting to find out more about other things, regardless if they left us alone or attacked. Anyways, getting off topic...I think Kairi and Shu are cruel to think that the merpeople are just animals. From what I've heard so far it seems like they are like humans (duh)! They have feelings too! How'd you feel like if you were caught in a net?! And that Tropic girl is also a bit annoying...I can feel Riku's jealousy there ~_^ (very cute of Riku~)

Now onto what I liked. ^__^ I liked the idea of Daisukis! :D It's great to be able to choose someone to be close to, regarless of species and gender. And the relationship between Leon and Cloud is cute. Very surprising but cute~ And Riku + Sora is a cute couple too...how is Sora going to respond?! Lolz.

My choice? Caught between A and C...A cause I want to see/read about a Razorfin...have heard/read of it but I'd like to see what happened...btw, is the Razorfin going to attack Riku adn Sora or Leon and Cloud? and C because I think Sora and Riku haven't got enough 'moments' together just yet...so it's all pretty confusing. I guess I can wait for their moments...so I'll go with A. ^_^