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Wow, I definitely would NEVER have thought of THIS plot hahahaha ^___^, its soooooooo cool! Its pretty angsty how Cloud sees Sephiroth as a Daisuki in front of Leon, pooor Leon.... ooooh, Tidus is actually not that bad in this one, I always read fics where they TOTALLY degrade the poor guy, sooo cute too, I think I'm gonna go and read your other one. I hope your having as much fun writing this one as I am reading it!!! Please continue!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Oooh, um... I guess I have to chose huh? Er... I dunno, I guess I'm greedy so... the last one hahahahahaha, have fun!!!!!

Ibe ibe interested in being your Beta...but we'll see. Meanwhile, I really, really love this fic. The concept is so completely enthralling and original and gaah! It just makes me want to sing! But I'll spare your poor innocent eardrums the agony. ^_~ My only real trouble here is the way you keep using the wrong tenses, or switching. Yes, I am the grammar nazi. Ph34r m3.

Oooh, I't 't decide....so I go for E. n_n;;

I love this chapter!! sora's so cute when he's nervous! and sephy has made his appearance!! XD can't wait for yourt cht chappie update! and being the greedy one that I am....I pick all the choices in one! =)

This story is brilliant!!!!! I really liked where it gave you looks into the past of the characters. I must be greedy and say E. I need everyone of thhose things to happen because they all sounded so good ~C~

I love this story. The way you write it is extrordinary. I haven't seen any typos either, so that gives ya extra points. I love how you add detail into the story, like in the end notes you'll explain things. This story idea seems very original, and I'm loving every moment of it. I'm also becoming redundant. Anyway, even though I probably haven't reveiwed enough to deserve to vote, I vote E)! 'Cause I'm greedy like that. ^_~

Yay! More chapters! Sorry I didn't review the last chapter; it see seemed to follow the choices exactly, without any added-in stuff, so I couldn't think of anything to say. But, it was still good, though. But, I must admit, this chapter was better! Riku's getting pushy, and it kind of contrasts with the earlier onalonality that he was given in previous chapters. Oh, and question (but it probably won't matter in upcoming chapters): is Cid and Auron a couple, or are they just living together? (the way Wakka describes them, and calling Auron "mommy" leads to the former, but just the way Cid seems to act, and how Auron is described to act, kind of lead to the latter. Oh, well.) I liked the part with the Gunblade. I found it kind of funny how, no matter where he is, you 't d't drag Squall from his Gunblade. Oh, and another question (more like runaway musing on my part this time): is Leon's real name in this fic Squall, or is it just Leon to simplify matters? Sorry, just random stupid questions on my part. Keep up the love triangle! It was just awesome how you added in Sephy (it's just shorter and easier to spell) is Cloud's daisuki (was that it?) when the whole time Leon was trying to be it. But it seems weird that, according to the random rumors shared about it, that Cloud wanted to ben'sn's daisuki, but just suddenly wasn't. Oh, well. I guess the plot just thickened, huh?

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Vote: C, or E!
What I like: The Daisuki idea, Cid's involvement with the mermaids, the whole Cloud//Sep/Sephiroth plot, esp especially the descriptions of the different species of mermaids. Actually, there's nothing I don't like. Great job, and update soon!

I really like this fic a lot, how you made up own own mer-jargon is pretty cool. I think it is really original and so far pretty good. I like the idea of the whole Daisuki(sp?) thing. I looked it up in a Japanese dictionary and it is interesting and I wonder if that is where you made the word up from. Dai: subject, theme or topic and Suki:like, be fond of, or love. I just thought that was interesting, maybe you didn't even get it from there and I could be totally wrong but I thought maybe it could be just a really cool coincidence(sp?) lol I hate bf for making me question my spelling abilities! He deleted word from the computer! grrrr..waysways. The only part I don't really care for is the parts with Kairi and humans because it seems pretty boring right now. Maybe it is just for future plot though so I guess I will have to live with it lol. I vote for all of those things to happen except the one with Kairi =P good luck I hope you update soon!

Excelent, awesome, amazing, fucking cool!.... anything positive this story and your last chapter IS.. it ROCKS .... as does all of your stories. I hope you never EVER lose inspuration because there would be alot of unhappy readers to deal with... and you really wouldn't want that.

I think that sora and Riku.. should have a little lover's spat.. (even if they aren't that way yet... heating gs ugs up a bit doesn't sound to bad .. heheheh)

And oh what the hell.. how bout Kairi and her father try try again?.. oh.. but dont let them succeed okay?.. that would really suck


I'm kinda pissed at Kairi for thinking that mer people are animalistinc and unintelligent... She SO doesn't get it... but oh well Dont ever let them catch a mermaid.. keep piling on a nice heap of failure for those evil humans. I especially liked cid wakka and the mention of auron in this chapter..

As always you've blown me away... keep up the good work You're doing an awesome job and I do beleive your one of the best writers out there!