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December 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
lol
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July 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow this is even more sick then I expected. I think you need serious help along with anyone else who likes this. May the Lord have mercy on this fic.
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February 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well written to be sure but not really my cup of tea. My fault though. I'm the one who read it. Not bad.
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December 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was a great fanfic, throughly entertaining, I gave it a 5 out of 5!
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July 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Okay, so it's not likely that Ridley would have a mammalian penis. It's also not likely that a giant dragon would speak English and fly around in outer space because an evil brain told him to. Artistic licence, dude, and willing suspension of disbelief.
But on the upside at least we're tng ang about penises here. That's always good.
But on the upside at least we're tng ang about penises here. That's always good.
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July 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
"Ridley felt his pulse thob towards his hips, forcing his penis to stand up straight."
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"Ridley threw himself upon Samus, jamming himself into her body. Ridley forced himself to thrust feverishly, even though he was twice Samus' size, feeling Samus' insides stretch and tear from his thrusting."
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Now, you're right. Perhaps I should have clarified my statement. "He was given a mammalian penis. A fucking mammalian penis, etc., etc." Personally, I'd say Ridley is closer related to crocodilians than anything so here's a link.
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http://www.crocodilian.com/crocfaq/faq-8.html
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Check Figure 9.5. While somewhat similar at first glance, this is quite different from the penis described in the story, is it not fun function even more so.
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"Ridley threw himself upon Samus, jamming himself into her body. Ridley forced himself to thrust feverishly, even though he was twice Samus' size, feeling Samus' insides stretch and tear from his thrusting."
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Now, you're right. Perhaps I should have clarified my statement. "He was given a mammalian penis. A fucking mammalian penis, etc., etc." Personally, I'd say Ridley is closer related to crocodilians than anything so here's a link.
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http://www.crocodilian.com/crocfaq/faq-8.html
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Check Figure 9.5. While somewhat similar at first glance, this is quite different from the penis described in the story, is it not fun function even more so.
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June 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*blink*
The previous reviewer obviously *doesn't* know anything about 'reptilian anatomy'.
All real reptiles have penii; crocodiles, snakes, geckos, turtlesmodomodo dragons, etera.era. Snakes and lizards have two -- called hemipenis.
The previous reviewer obviously *doesn't* know anything about 'reptilian anatomy'.
All real reptiles have penii; crocodiles, snakes, geckos, turtlesmodomodo dragons, etera.era. Snakes and lizards have two -- called hemipenis.
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June 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This story could have been good. It could have been so good. Not only does have it have Ridley winning, it has him thinking about his life Samus. It has him thinking about what she meant to him. Even the misplaced sexual attraction I can deal with. But a penis? A fucking penis? Do you not have any idea about reptilian anatomy? I mean come on.
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Really, the necrophelia/rape was just ridiculous. Not because of what it is, but just because what Ridley is. Had you treated it in a way closer to John Gardener's Grendel, where Ridley was looking in on another species it would have been better. Simply put, Ridley is not a human. He does not think with human thoughts. But of course you even gave him human genitals, so it stands to reason you'd just portray him as a human in a giant lizard's body.
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While better than a lot of stuff out there, this seems written for shock value more than anything and I wasn't shocked, so you didn't even accomplish that.
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Really, the necrophelia/rape was just ridiculous. Not because of what it is, but just because what Ridley is. Had you treated it in a way closer to John Gardener's Grendel, where Ridley was looking in on another species it would have been better. Simply put, Ridley is not a human. He does not think with human thoughts. But of course you even gave him human genitals, so it stands to reason you'd just portray him as a human in a giant lizard's body.
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While better than a lot of stuff out there, this seems written for shock value more than anything and I wasn't shocked, so you didn't even accomplish that.
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May 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You know, I never thought I'd find necrophilia understandable, let alone appealing.
...Okay, maybe not understandable, but it was a very, um, engaging story.
...Okay, maybe not understandable, but it was a very, um, engaging story.
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May 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Sick