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July 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
lol definetly a lemon LeonxCloud one.....
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July 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that was really good!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
yeah is Sora's mum ever mentioned?
I know Tidus dad is Jecht but apart from that....
write more!!!
yeah is Sora's mum ever mentioned?
I know Tidus dad is Jecht but apart from that....
write more!!!
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July 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nice story dude ^o^ I love it Sora and Riku are the best KH couple I now ^o^ really good story
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July 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
loved it absolutly loved it!!! great job. i have to say this is the best fanfic of riku and sora i have read. keep up the great work!!! and one day in the future please could u write another riku and sora fanfic. pleeeeaaasssseeee! but love the story and i think im gonna suggest it to my firends lol. well great story.
~Darknesha
~Darknesha
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July 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You mean as a threesome? oooo O_O This chapters great! in fact your whole story was great! Just minor spelling errors here and there. lol other then that, it was GREAT! Ja ne!
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June 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I lvoe it...it was soooo cute ^^ I'm happy that Sora's mum wasn't like "GOD NO MY SONS GAY" at least she was happy for him not like other parents!!!! But it was great ^^
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June 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I know I'm reviewing my own story but I have to respond to Ash's review. For your info, the format obviously got messed up on my story. I never make spelling mistakes like those. Just ask any of my other readers. I've noticed that sometimes this site mixes up some stories and changes characters like " to 8. You can read the real version on this other site called, "nfiction.com". That one should be fine for spelling. Yes, I'll admit, my spelling isn't always the greatest, but come on, like I would make a mistake like "aas eas". I don't even know what that could have come from. Thanks for reviewing though. I wouldn't have noticed the change. ^.~
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June 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ok, spelling mistakes everywhere. hell first paragraph (aas eas)=what the hell?? (ge ege)=oookkkaayyy?!?!
Same here. second paragraph (theotsoats)=what is up with this!
again. seventh paragraph (andrtedrted)=and this is what?
and a couple others but I've got to go now, school and all.
well bye
Same here. second paragraph (theotsoats)=what is up with this!
again. seventh paragraph (andrtedrted)=and this is what?
and a couple others but I've got to go now, school and all.
well bye
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May 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
First of all, O.O ......... Second:
*WTH!? Sora's mom!?....jeez, to think a parent would give a dam*....-_-
*WTH!? Sora's mom!?....jeez, to think a parent would give a dam*....-_-
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October 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i enjoyed this ff, you wrote well and it was a good ending and the content was perfect!!
2 thumbs up, plz keep up the good work
mayhem.
2 thumbs up, plz keep up the good work
mayhem.