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September 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Indeedy...finally, one of the few people who have seen what a foundation Max Payne is to write fanfiction on. Well written, although you should have tried to keep up that melodrama from the first part of the story throughout the whole thing. The story of Max Payne is built up after the principles of film noir, and one of the things that makes that genre what it is is all the over-exaggeration on melodrama and all the similes, metaphors, and comparison, plus the "lone hero" thing. But, apart from this little criticism, feel satisfied. I liked your story quite well.