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November 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I loved this. Usually I'd want to give a detailed critique and point out what I didn't like and what I liked best...but unfortunately I'm sleepy, and I thought it was only fair I give at least a brief review to a story I enjoyed so much.
Vincent was amazing, very sexy and very believable...I could almost hear him speaking as I read. I like seeing him "hot and sweaty", besides. And you're right about the sad lack of Vincent smut online. I'm a huge fan of Walter/Henry, and just finished Silent Hill 3 shortly after finishing 2. I immediately looked around for Vincent/Heather, assuming, given the characters obvious sex appeal (he's almost the male equivalent of Maria or Cynthia, in terms of being a seducer), and I already knew that a lot of women adored him. I was shocked at just how little I found!
Anyway, it was a delicious read! I particularly loved the "give...give me. . . ." sequence, for some reason.
Vincent was amazing, very sexy and very believable...I could almost hear him speaking as I read. I like seeing him "hot and sweaty", besides. And you're right about the sad lack of Vincent smut online. I'm a huge fan of Walter/Henry, and just finished Silent Hill 3 shortly after finishing 2. I immediately looked around for Vincent/Heather, assuming, given the characters obvious sex appeal (he's almost the male equivalent of Maria or Cynthia, in terms of being a seducer), and I already knew that a lot of women adored him. I was shocked at just how little I found!
Anyway, it was a delicious read! I particularly loved the "give...give me. . . ." sequence, for some reason.
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September 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very well done. Yes, there aren't a lot of smut biscuits involving Vincent, or Heather and Claudia for that matter. Have you thought about writing some VincentXClaudia or HeatherXClaudia stories? Or, maybe one involving all three of them? That final confrontation of theirs in the chapel could easily go another way in a fanfic.
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August 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
.......and where the hell was I when this was made? Meh either way, more sexy motherfucker time, with Father Vincent. I need to say a couple of Hail marys and a ciggerate after this hehe.
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June 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love Silent Hill (the whole series) and I love Vincent~Heather. And your story was grand.
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April 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Nice little story you got here.
So... I liked the way you added the different movements to the actual dialogue.
It was an easy read (kept my interest).
Um... I read your other story "rvesrvescence" and now I will see if you have any other stories.
Have a good day.
So... I liked the way you added the different movements to the actual dialogue.
It was an easy read (kept my interest).
Um... I read your other story "rvesrvescence" and now I will see if you have any other stories.
Have a good day.
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April 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yes I know I'm reviewing my own story...but I just realized for you continuity freaks that I bungled something up. I was taking out some frustrations with my unlimited submachine gun and I realized Heather has on an orange turtle neck under her vest.
Damn.
Okay, I'm really a stickler for comparison and I love to pick on things like this. But I'm just not going back in to change it. Sorry. :-P Callan Aan AU fic if you want where Heather couldn't find her orange turtleneck before the adventure started.
Two other quick things to address. A friend who read the fic said she couldn't see Heather stomping on Vincent's foot. After having alot to do with self defense training I can tell you there's a pressure point there, and aiming for the groin if they've got you against the wall doesn't always work (anyways I don't think Heather wanted to damage that!). The foot's got a pressure point...so it's a valid attack, not just her being "girly."
Also this fic assumes you're playing the game on Normal Riddle Mode. I forgot there's no chemistry book on Hard or Extreme+ Modes. My bad.
Damn.
Okay, I'm really a stickler for comparison and I love to pick on things like this. But I'm just not going back in to change it. Sorry. :-P Callan Aan AU fic if you want where Heather couldn't find her orange turtleneck before the adventure started.
Two other quick things to address. A friend who read the fic said she couldn't see Heather stomping on Vincent's foot. After having alot to do with self defense training I can tell you there's a pressure point there, and aiming for the groin if they've got you against the wall doesn't always work (anyways I don't think Heather wanted to damage that!). The foot's got a pressure point...so it's a valid attack, not just her being "girly."
Also this fic assumes you're playing the game on Normal Riddle Mode. I forgot there's no chemistry book on Hard or Extreme+ Modes. My bad.
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April 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I hope you know you killed me with the third chapter there. ::happydead::
I'M PRINTING THIS OUT. RIGHT NOW. O_O
I'M PRINTING THIS OUT. RIGHT NOW. O_O