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for Golden Sun: Sex alright

by Streti

person Mikaa
schedule November 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Will this continue, and will you write more? This was actually well done.

Mikaa, Lord of the Flypaper
person Streti
schedule September 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for the comments, everyone.

To everybody who wished for continuation: I originally intended this story to be self-contained without continuation. I did think of another small GS lemon, but as writing lemons isn't he most important thing in my life, that hasn't come to be. I'll take a new part into consideration, though.

Although, I heard that there was a good Advance Wars lemon on FF.net, which got pulled out of course. If someone can find this lemon for me, a new Golden Sun lemon from me is very likely. It was in this address: http://www.fanfiction.net/read.php?storyid=1418297

To Annonymous: don't be so cautious. That wasn't even critique, let alone flaming.

To DeathSpawn: Sure, but all fics can't be carved from the same wood.
person fan
schedule August 7, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Please please PLEASE make another GS het fic!!!! I'm desperate! Please?
person David
schedule July 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Ooooookkkkkkk.... That was kind of insane but whatever. Good story!!
person 1-1 i
schedule July 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wow!This fic was very very very nice!After ff.net KICKED out their lemons i desperately search 4 GS hentai fics.I'm begging u to continue this or add a new one,please?
person DeathSpawn2099
schedule June 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hm. A foursome. Not bad at all, though there could've been some more action on the part of the guys. I'm a virgin, but I think sex is best when the two+ parties give each other pleasure. But that's just my opinion.
person Annomynous
schedule June 16, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I actually find it very fascinating. If only it was a bit more long and interesting. Uh...don't call this a flame, please?
person The Bovinator
schedule April 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Write more!! Please!!
person vegetakaiba
schedule February 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I think this was a really great fic. Golden Sun is a game that deserves a fic like this. I fully support your writing style. I would also love it if you continued this one because it's so well done. Thanks, and again, a job well done on your part.