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January 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great fic! It manages to translate the group dynamic between the four in-game into an excellent lemon. Whether or not the act is humiliating is, as you said, up to a reader's interpretation - but to me it comes across as pretty innocent. Mia's clearly enjoying herself (as are the guys, obviously) and that fits the tone of the fic as playful fun rather than anything too serious. Again, very good and keep writing!
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December 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It's okay that you haven't reviewed before, now that you've redeemed yourself. I wish my other silent readers would do the same. ;)
I'll just reply to all of your reviews here. As I mentioned before, I did not intend for Sex alright to be about humiliation. Of course, readers are free to read into a story what they will. I do see where the idea comes from, even if I consider it an unfortunate interpretation. Basically, if Mia felt like she was being humiliated, she wouldn't go through with the whole thing, and it would severely affect her attitude towards the guys. My intent here stops at teasing/embarrassment, and hopefully, in good spirits. If I had intended for a feeling of humiliation, the tone of the fic would be quite different.
I might do a Lost Age fic sometime, but it would likely not be like the previous three Golden Sun fics. Isaac/Jenna I haven't really considered. If you people want more GS fics, you could try harassing other writers as well. Throw a challenge at AFF, or a request at the Greyarchive.
Thanks your reviews though, Blood Prince!
I'll just reply to all of your reviews here. As I mentioned before, I did not intend for Sex alright to be about humiliation. Of course, readers are free to read into a story what they will. I do see where the idea comes from, even if I consider it an unfortunate interpretation. Basically, if Mia felt like she was being humiliated, she wouldn't go through with the whole thing, and it would severely affect her attitude towards the guys. My intent here stops at teasing/embarrassment, and hopefully, in good spirits. If I had intended for a feeling of humiliation, the tone of the fic would be quite different.
I might do a Lost Age fic sometime, but it would likely not be like the previous three Golden Sun fics. Isaac/Jenna I haven't really considered. If you people want more GS fics, you could try harassing other writers as well. Throw a challenge at AFF, or a request at the Greyarchive.
Thanks your reviews though, Blood Prince!
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December 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really love this fic, its fucking great! I loved the fact you had the three guys kind of humiliat Mia, though I was kind of hoping that you would have one of them cum in her mouth. You should write more fics 'cause you wirte the best GS fics I've ever read man
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November 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
:o Awsome dude. Just Awsome.
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July 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
write another chap plz!!
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January 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Criticism with a point? Thank you! I did not intend for an atmosphere of humiliation, though. I don't see the cumshower as a ritual of humiliation, and I think of her as having the final control in the situation. If you care for a debate with examples and arguments, I'm open for it :)
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March 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
whoa! i love it when there's like, 3 guys and only one girl, but how come they weren't touching her more? write more!
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March 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Whoa... O_O
Sequel, sequel! And let her get some payback! >:D
Sequel, sequel! And let her get some payback! >:D
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December 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
That was a GREAT story! Never take it off Adultff.net! Please make more GS stories, the selection is very small!
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December 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
That was a great fic. I hope you intend to write even more great Golden Sun stories. Maybe Isaac/Mia only? Or maybe one with some of the GS:TLA characters?