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for I need to feel you in me

by GeneralHawk

person oath_keeper
schedule December 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
whoa thats one weird song fic
person Wow.
schedule October 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That sucked.
schedule September 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I do not mean to offend, but this story is VERY bland. there's no sense of subtlety or passion. the characters have no life to them. otherwise, it'd be a pretty damned good fic. oh, I don't particularly like my lemons in script form, though.
person The wandering Chibi
schedule November 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Woah! Vile and Zero Yaoi Pairing!!! *drools*
Your Fic rocks! I don't care what the others say, this is RARE!!!
Please make more of your lovely fics!
*begs like a dog*
person Claire
schedule June 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
ooooooookkkkkkkaaaaaayyyyyyy
person Ryuu
schedule May 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
that sucked come on I wanna seme dme dir-tay action between Zero and X ill do that with a song ......