rate_review Reviews

One problem I've seen so far - you mentioned that shuri was a small port town.

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I've lived on Okinawa, where Shuri rests. Shuri-jo was the castle of the royal family of the entire Ryuku kingdom, and the city around it is... well, it's no small port town.

ooooooo I can't wait to read more...I really really enjoy the story so far, as well as the characters. update soon please :)
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let me just start off by saying thank you for updating. you really have no idea how much i love this fic. it's soo sweet and romantic, and very well-written. ever thought of writing a romance novel and submitting it to one of those publishing companies? you really ought to. i think you're really talented. really, you are. i've read a lot of romance novels and trust me, this is the kind of story that i like to add to my collection of faves. err, i think i'm going off topic. let's see, great third chapter. i can't wait to read the next chapter. ^_^

OMG!!! This was so cool and sad, Maxi and Su make the perfect pairing! I love this fic that means I am going to have to update soon!!! Keep up the good work!

AHHHHHHHHHHHHH! YOU GOT ME HOOKED! PLZ POST THE NEXT CHAPTER REEEEEALLLLY SOON! THIS IS REALLY GOOD. I'M FALLING IN LOVE WITH MAXI'S CHARACTER AS I SPEAK. HE ROX!!!!!!

weeeeeeee!! *does happy dance* that was GREAT. keep going! for heaven's sake keep going!! *is a sucker for maxi too ^_^*

this was good keep writing. I want to read the next chapter!

I can take a guess who that pirate is. Maxi *cough cough* ahem! well anyways! i love this fic already. I can't wait for chapter 2 so get to writing girly! I love it!!!