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for The Many Deaths of Ms. Croft

by eyeteeth

person Anon
schedule January 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Seriously, these are some of the most engrossing and disturbing short stories I've ever read in my life. Your writing ability, descriptive language, characterisation, etc is probably some of the best on this entire website. Eye Tooth, if you still visit this site, please write some more. I'd prefer it if you just did some straight up sex stories, but kind of doubt that's going to happen. Anything would be good though.
person ThaWalk
schedule January 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
anons just a cunt great stories
person Emperor Norton II
schedule January 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Utterly pointless and disgusting. This should never have been posted anywhere.
person Anon
schedule December 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is disgusting! How can you possibly find writing death repeatedly to be arousing! This is sick! OMG, you FREAK!
person Knorg
schedule April 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Funny thing, computer game characters really do die one hell of a lot - especially when I'm playing drunk. You didn't see Lara in the movie falling off the ledge because the bloke with the controller was trying to solve puzzles pissed. There was no jumping back to the start of the level. In many ways, fanfiction based on video games probably ought to portray characters dying more often, simply to be closer to the original source material. The descriptions of violence are detailed and somewhat loveingly descibed; the sort of thring they give Tarrentino awards for. Not remotely my cup of tea as far as erotica goes - if, indeed, you find it erotic as some seem to - , but in terms of gore action it's top notch. Sort of thing people watch horror movies for, really.
person Wakboth
schedule August 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Grotesque but very well-written stories; an interesting idea well executed. As for the complaints about the lack of eroticism: nobody said the stories on this site have to be erotic; only that they are rated R or NC-17, right?
person Anon
schedule July 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I'm gonna be sick... BLEARG! Yay, vomit...
person Anon
schedule March 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
ewwwww
person Duke Nukem
schedule February 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
great! i love it!
next time have street fighter and kill cammy.
or instead of lara die just leave her horribly maimed, but live to gripe about it.
or lara turn into a zombie or something where she don't just die, but suffers for an eternity.
lara croft in hell?
person Anon
schedule February 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
My goodness, what the hell is wrong with you?!