rate_review Reviews

This story should have been titled "Instant Rebound". No sooner has Isaac lost Jenna than he's in bed with a near-total stranger - and the same with Sheba! It's even scarier given that neither of them were having relations with their previous beloveds, so the rebound is stronger than the original throw! Seriously, this is like passing a note saying "Be my valentine" to the girl in front of you in class, getting a note saying "Get lost" back... and then as soon as the bell rings, you grab the girl sitting to your left and start screwing.

In general, both Isaac and Sheba come off as childish, whiny, and thoroughly pathetic.

The lemon is pretty flat, too. Not bad, but it easily pales before other fics in this section, especially "Moments" and "Sins of the Flesh".

I saw this fic and thought it might be different from The Insanity and The Hunted... well, it is, but it's not better.

It was good. It's interesting that you should mention the Felix/Sheba couple, since I haven't seen a single Felix/Sheba on this entire damn site (much to my chagrin). Keep up the good work!

Don't listen to the other punks who have reviewed you story! There's nothing wrong with the Isaac/Sheba pairing. In fact, thank you for writing something different than the usual stuff.

mooore brilliant. can u write one about ivan and sheba not a sequal or pre-qual but a separate story about them.

the excessive spaces confused me.

Wow. I'm sorry nobody else reviewed this. Thought the pairing was VERY odd I did like this story. I beleiev that any paring can work if there is enough proof and you did this one very well. And remember a famous Latin Phrase.

Illegitimus Non Carborundum

Don't let the bastards grind you down

Keep up the good work!