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for First Rule Of Stealing a Kiss

by Sabulana

person sheero
schedule April 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
^________________________^ yay... i didnt know you had adult Fan fiction. *purrs in corner* ish very happy... you really need to write more jak II yaoi... *gives carrots to the plot bunnies*

~sheero
person Gir
schedule April 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
wow! i luv this fic. you have a talent, that you do.
person Dark Siren
schedule April 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
xD So good! ;.; Write more TornxJak ficcies, because I'm too lazy to write one myself >.>... I need some kind of inspiration, dammit. Erol isck ick in my head for some reason o.o... ^^ I can't help it, I always love the evil rat bastards XD

o.o think I'm getting off-topic again.. geez, I am OOC today XD Normally for reviews, I just put "Write more! Write more! Write more! Write more!" or something along those very short, fangirlish lines..

Ehh o.o..

Okie, any problems with the fic? Few. I believe there were very little spelling errors, can't remember.. x.x Also, it happened kinda fast for me, like, there wasn't much description xD but that's okie, it's not like some other authors I've seen... >.> The lack of description wasn't enough to make me angry ^.^ I still love your fanfic(s) either way :D I gotta remember to review your Unaccepted fics at evil.. ugh.. that other place.. well, you know, because you have 'em there >D

Okie, byebye! ^^

DS
person FluffyVampire
schedule April 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Whoo! Jak and Torn yaoi! Finally some lovin' for poor TornXD
person LittleMissGothicChyld
schedule March 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ahh. But she didn't did she?
Go you! Go you! Me likey... No! You're starting to make me like it more now... Damn you! I'll get you for this! I will! ... Dunno how but i will!
person Reaper-X
schedule March 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That story was exiting. *wipes keyd ofd off with towel* please put the missing lemon on!!!!!
person Kuroi
schedule March 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
wow this is great, i can't wait to read another. ;)