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for Barbie Sims

by ICAD

person Aelan05
schedule April 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
what.. thats just.. beyond terrible.
person anon
schedule August 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
that was badly written. and.....uh....how old are you, really?
schedule January 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I enjoyed the reviews your story procured, and have to agree with the majority of them. It was mildly funny, maybe not in the way you intended, fairly filippant.
person EW
schedule October 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
While I am into this stuff, it could be WAYYY longer. Plus, don't EVER use chat speak.(cuz, lol, lmao, y, u, r, etc.)
person Andrea
schedule September 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
He stuck the whip INTO her clit. That doesn't even fucking make sense.???
person Flick
schedule August 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
There's gonna be another chapter, right?
*steals big blue dildo* All mine, Barbie!
Bwahaha.
I'm hooked now, so keep it comin'! *waits for more*
person Mel
schedule August 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This story was really, really bad, like horribly written.
person Anon
schedule March 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Sick story, bad spelling, poor knowledge of anatomy...
person darkangel
schedule February 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that was good but can you write some more, maybe some rape:))
person Lust
schedule November 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*snickers* that was more funny than arousing.