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This review= not worth my time.....i put no soul into it because the story had 0 soul, was awful, and wasn't even worth my time reading the first sentence. So uhhhh yea this stories sucks ass......and hard......*Takes P-90 and wastes clip on monitor* *takes katana and cuts comp,desk, and monitor full of holes to peices* don't piss me off with bad stories......

"WTF?! 'Marusame' means noodles?! ........eh I don't care what it means I'm still usein it!"-Maru

You deserve a big kick in the balls. This is just about the sorriest piece of smut I have ever taken the time to read, I don't want to sound like a romance freak but you call it devine love and its all about random screwing. A guy from Lord knows when that nobody suspects who somehow attracts every female for no apparent reason and then at the end he screws somebody half his age. If this is self insertation you have to take your ego out and cut it in half a couple times and then get this crap off the net!

If your going to put this up then kindly place...PORN WITHOUT PLOT in the summary. Good day sir!

Heheh, I thought my English was sub-par! I think you may change named from "Kyoto Necross" to "I am Special Ed"!

You have no clue do you? Turn your hentai off, get your hand out of your pants, and pick up a book on anatomy before you try ANYTHING like this again, dude.

nah, forget it. DON'T try anything like this again. You suck.

That's just plain awful!
AsSelfSelf-Insertation lemons and the sheer awesomeness of the author avatar weren't bad enough, you've completely killed your fic with all this "sticking fingers in clits" and "tight clit" nonsense.
Do yourself a favour and read a biology book on female anat
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1/5. But at least it was something to laugh about.