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April 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was a pretty bad story. ^^; I'm sorry, but there was no grammar, and the lemon was kind of horrible. Good luck on your next one.
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January 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ivr or whatever his name is, must be a pimp. If he was in SC II, he'll probably get his ass kicked for flirting with all the girls.
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December 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Terrible; no hope of improvement.
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September 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Heh heh heh! This story sure is amusing, whether or not it means to be. You've gotta admit, dude, the ladies blush far too often, and your similies for comparing erotic moments to scratching eyeballs is... well, incredibly bizzare.
If it's okay, I'd like to use this story for my MST3K-like stories that I'm doing. If there are any problems, just review it when it is up. Have a nice day!
If it's okay, I'd like to use this story for my MST3K-like stories that I'm doing. If there are any problems, just review it when it is up. Have a nice day!
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September 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OMG ROFLMAO
"You're pretty." *blush*
"They're pretty." *blush*
Priceless, priceless stuff. I've never seen so many "fucking her out of her mind"s in one place in my entire life. XD
"You're pretty." *blush*
"They're pretty." *blush*
Priceless, priceless stuff. I've never seen so many "fucking her out of her mind"s in one place in my entire life. XD
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August 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh man... I thought this was absolutely hilarious. Warhammer 40k and Soul Calibur crossover?
*falls over laughing*
And his pick up lines were exactly the same each time... This was the funniest thing I've read in a while.
By the way, Inquisitor Lords are not "of" the Grey Knights... The Grey Knights are the Chamber Militant of the Ordo Malleus. At LEAST have the courtesy to get the organization your Inquisitor Lord is associated with correct.
*falls over laughing*
And his pick up lines were exactly the same each time... This was the funniest thing I've read in a while.
By the way, Inquisitor Lords are not "of" the Grey Knights... The Grey Knights are the Chamber Militant of the Ordo Malleus. At LEAST have the courtesy to get the organization your Inquisitor Lord is associated with correct.
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August 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I'm going to say this as gently as I can...you just plain suck.
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July 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Heh heh. That was cool. Heh heh.
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April 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Um, okay. I'll admit. I was a little skeptical of this kind of crossover. I still am. However, there is one thing that bothers me: do you know what a clitoris is? It is * th* the sexual opening on a woman. It is one of the main sexual nerve clusters on a woman that just so happens to be near the vagina, which *is* the sexual opening on a woman. Please open an anatomy book before writing ano lem lemon to make sure you're getting things right.
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April 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Something else.......how old are you? If your inta Yu-Gay-O! then I don't know what ta think.