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for Divine Love

by Kyoto

person torquemada_coteaz
schedule September 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
zervus,
First if you are NOT crossing SC with Warhammer 40k then ignore it. if you are well there is something i have to set straight.
THE GREY KNIGHTS DON'T HAVE ANY INQUISITORS!!!
The Inquisitors belong to the Inquisition and this organisation is divided in threee Ordos(Maleus, Hereticus and Xeno). The Grey Knights are only the Ordo Militaris for the Ordo Maleus.
So Tyr is an Inquisitor of the Orda Maleus NOT of the Grey Knights. together they are called the demonhunters
I am a demonhunter-player so it just pisses me off if someone is twisting the background.
person Bruce
schedule June 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hey, how come the rest of the fanfic isn't there anymore? please repost or send the full copy to me, its a good one! thanks.
person Anon
schedule December 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I was kind of sad, because I thought Mi-Na Taki and Xianghua were going to get some. v.v I must agree with Seung Mina. xD
person Dreamer
schedule November 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WOW! that was HOTT!
person BRP
schedule August 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
=LOL=
i liked this new hero, even if he was a scank. I was disappointed that he had yet to seduce Ivy. :( U mean. Please continue, or, as one of the characters threatened, i shall shove a sword up where the sun dont shine, mwahahaha. :P
person BRP
schedule August 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh yeah.
When a man touches a woman's clit with his hands or penis, it starts to jolt her into arrousal, often, even makes her cum many a time. Next, a man must slide his sword into the woman's sheathe, and together, they climax. May i suggest you read an anatomy book as well as love-making books? The Kama Sutra is a classic. Also, find a nice dating partner, to learn the art of love with. K? Still, I like your tale. Please, do continue.
person Jennifer
schedule July 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I have to agree last chapter is funny.
person Inazuma
schedule July 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I don't see why everybody's getting so pissed off about this fanfic. Get your heads out of your asses. Fanfiction allows you to portray characters any way you fucking like, as long as you don't claim them. Heh. Kyoto, keep on writing my friend.
person Elklodge
schedule June 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Don't listen to these other guys about quitting. Sure this fic sucked, but you shouldn't quit just because of that everyone has a bad story and I'm sure if you keep working at it you'll get better. Now to cut the Disney crap and tell you straight up, you need to improve...fast!
person Anon
schedule June 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
HEAD FANFIC HONCHO: So girls, what do you think of Kyoto's fanfic?

CASSANDRA: It sucked balls. If some guy was to get easy with me....I'll.........

SOPHITIA: Sister, CHILL! Anyways, I am glad I'm not in this fanfic.

SEUNG MINA: Same here. If someone wrote something so bad about me, I'll spear them through the ass.

TAKI: Well, looks like I have another demon to capture, and that demon is a BAD FANFIC WRITER!

IVY: The next time I see this guy, I will cut off all his parts with my beloved Valentine.

TALIM: How dare they wrote a lemon about me getting it on with a 30 year old. I'm only 15, put me with someone around my age range.

XIANGHUA: Oh, I liked the fanfic!

*everyone glances at Xianghua*

XIANGHUA: *winks* Just kidding! His fanfic sucks!