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for unnamed people

by Miroku

person Anon
schedule May 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Kinda funny, I guess. Maybe you should learn to spell a bit though....
person anony
schedule March 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
you suck you suck you suck don't give up your day job, you suck you suck you suck

and you can't write for shit, loser. Pay more attention in Remedial English for 10th graders: learning the ba the they taught in second grade but you were too busy sniffing glue to notice...

fuckwit douchebag.
person Anon
schedule March 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I want my eyesight back.