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August 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
quite a few spelling mistakes in this
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August 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I cannot believe you... you... really hot Miroku. Plz write more ^_^
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June 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I would have probably read almost the whole thing if it was grammatically correct.
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May 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ok... thats kinda strange
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May 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
evil this is evil but it is pretty good
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May 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Uhhhhh....
Are you a child or are you just dumb?
nice effort, I guess. It was...sort of funny...stupid funny.
It did make me laugh....but bad fan fictions usually do...
*sigh*
Are you a child or are you just dumb?
nice effort, I guess. It was...sort of funny...stupid funny.
It did make me laugh....but bad fan fictions usually do...
*sigh*
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March 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Spell check! Grammar! Punctuation!
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October 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ok..You need to go back to elementary school and learn how to spell...How the hell can you take off a guys clothes AFTER he gets tied to the bed? That's like..Impossible! You REALLY didn't have to share the part about the girl taking a shit..you could have just said she was going to freshen up..That might save future readers from being disgusted and giving you bad reviews like I and many other people did..and you just pretty put put disgrace on the Sims! That's just wrong man...
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August 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Absolutely hilarious.
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July 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ok... that was... bad... First off, how can you write a fic about the Sims...? Itbe ube uh... kinda hard. That's just me...