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SHIT! FOR FUCKS SAKE.. WHY AREN'T YOU UPDATING THIS THING!! PLZ....

I love these games! Hana and Rain are the perfect femslash couple and you've written them so well. 1 question, why was Rain sleeping alone in the first place? Good story, is there any more? Maybe I have 2 questions!! Eve.

HI AGAIN!!!

THIS STORY HAS THE MOST HITS AND REVIEWS BUT IT'S NOT UPDATED!!!

WELL I'VE TAKEN MATTERS INTO MY OWN FAT HAIRY LESBIAN HANDS REWRITTEN THE STORY AND FOLLOWED IT ON.

EVERYONE WHO READS THIS STORY ALL 810+ HAS TO READ "LATER AT NIGHT" BECAUSE ITS GREAT AND YOU'LL LOVE IT.

MAKE SURE YOU LEAVE FEEDBACK AND RATE IT AFTER YOU'VE READ IT SO EVERYBODY ELSE CAN SEE HOW GREAT IT IS TOO.

ALSO READ RATE AND REVIEW WORKING GIRL, SHARING IS FUN, THE THREESOME, DANCING IN THE DARK, WE'RE GOING SHOPPING AND SWEETIE. THEY'RE HOT!!!

Wow. That is wonderful read. If I'm allowed to leave you any critisism it would be only that the sex doesn't go on for long and isn't very graphic. You're writing style seems different in the final section than the rest. You have a lovely lyrical flow with your words throughout the story and are very detailed in your descriptions of whats going on but this detail seems to dye when it gets to the good stuff. Is this your first f/f fic? Are you shying away from writing down what happens between your characters? I would hate you to read this and think I am slating your work because I thought it was amazing. I'm just shocked that I found myself enjoying the nonsexual parts more than the sex that I'd chosen to read it for. I have played the game a few times and all though I'm no expert, you did seem to get the characterisation very well. Please continue with this story but considerr that if sex is something you don't want to write then just leave it out, you have such a lovely sensual tone to your writing that you don't need it. I'd read the rest of thes story without it and I only opened it up for a little one handed reading. Now look at all this typing you've made me do!!!

Great story, highly recommended. Rated 5*

Hey I didn't realise there was a petition. I'm joining the march with Black Haired Deamon and lexus.

We WANT MORE!!! WE WANT MORE!!!

I know it was only a joke but I'm here to join Black Haired Demon's petition! write more goddamn it! and let them get it on after the phone call, this is a peTITion afterall!!! great fic but we want more. come on every one WE WANT MORE! WE WANT MORE!!!

COME ON!!! what are you waiting for..... a petition? Get going with this fic I just love this pair. Yeah! fuck her Hana *evil smirk*

Hey you can't end it like this I'm expecting gunfights after that call it has to be important to interupt them in the middle of something SUPER important

Thus action fic with LOTS of SEX for those two!

Don't you just love them?!

Hi there.
It appears that you are the originator of this little "Fear Effect Fan Fic Corner" as yours is the eest est dated fic so I would firstly like to thank you for getting the ball rolling. I've been a fan of this game and it's characters since the beginning and have been searching for fan fiction for so long. I could never understand why no one had taken these wonderful characers and written further stories about them so, although you have not written most of the stories here you have been credited as the insperation, so thank you for creating this.
Anyway, that said, on to writing a review. I think this is a wonderful piece of work. I agree with the reviewer before me that it doesn't hold the greatest sex scene in this section (that for me is "The Threesome") but it does have something that none of the others has (unfortunately including my own) which is the beginnings of a plot and strong characterisation. I love Hana and Rain so reading about them fucking each otherainrains out is a great thing but the reason I love them is for how they react in situations, to each other and the predicaments they get themselves into and this story has the start to all that. Please don't let that be the end...

Very insperational. It convinced me to post my own Fear Effect story here.

EVERYONE PLEASE READ STORY 21712

GAMES/MISC/WORKING GIRL!