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by SicksickMan

person saoplufag
schedule December 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yummmmm
person KKz
schedule December 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
More!!! ^^
person Hythine
schedule May 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awesome...though i think you got Mary's character a little wrong, but its your story. In the games i always go after mary (or the shy one)

Write more plz
person ??????????
schedule July 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
who knew jack was such a pimp and a perv write more i find it funny
person Mr. B
schedule July 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You live up to your name. *thumbs up* Write more!
person Tint
schedule June 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Coming from a true Harvest Moon: Nack To Nature fan, I think that it's good. I was a little dissapointed when you chose Mary to be next, I was honestly expecting Elli. Keep it up and hopefully, fit the other girls in.
person yayaya
schedule April 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Karen! and make it hottt;)
person Vivi239
schedule April 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yes, do a yuri next.
person Mega64
schedule April 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
A Jack/Karen fic next. Those are always erotic.
person Neo-Cooler
schedule April 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I vote for Karen. Btw good story - nice plot