rate_review Reviews

Sex for the sake of sex... not my cup of tea. It was rather redundant "guy sees horny girl, she is wet, they fuck". I will applaud you for writing though, with a smidgen of work it could be better but again, I am biased and this is only my opinion.

From the sex stand point, it is fairly good. Chockful of smut and sex.

I've never seen a wider vocabulary of sex terms. It's very fast paced too.

"It was now Sasha's turn to make horny facial gestures."
^Best line ever.

I'm sorry, but I love sick, perverted stories. This, however, was unacceptabley perverted. To be honest, alien spores and Harvest Moon don't mix. It's like trying to put some version of what -- Halo and Playboy Mansion in a pure game. The pairings were just- aweful. Little girls don't deserve to be ravaged by a mayor who looks like the mayor from the Power Puff Girls, and from a nerd whom works in a Chicken Store. Thing. You need to be a little kinder to gays and lesbians, because they are not 'faggots' and 'lesbos'. Now, I'm not saying it was a terrible story, but you need to work on it. Majorly.

Your story is really good. Update soon!

I really like this story but i would like to also see you continue the fire emblem one too

=.= you seem to have a liking of somewhat humiliating, degrading sex....oh yeah...you need a pedo warning too..ugg it made me sick.

first off: i'm proud of you for having the patiants to make a plot: even if it was just for the excuse for smut...at least there was and explanation...secondly...the sex was gross...and seriously...WHERES THE YURI?? WHERES THE YAOI?? ... - slap - the parings where bazar and plain. ... oh yeah...and your descriptions where...very dirty...but somewhat amusing.. the term 'whack off' shouldn't be used in a lemon....it just shouldn't....

Well, this is a good start, but now you really need to continue it. Like put down what happens with Anne or Ellie. Or even Popuri. There are still plenty of girls that you haven't had done yet. And it's well past time for you to get them done.

COOL! Can you continue? maybe you can have Elli fuck the charred remains of the doctor XD

what? no getting on with Karen? Make anouther chapter when he does, THEN you'll have a good story. Nobody has writen anything good yet involving Karen...

Well? You gonna continue? I want to see a big Hm orgie!