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December 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Nice story, although it needs some work with typos, etc. I really liked the ending, and the way you portray the submission is hot. It would be nice to see more detail applied to the transformations/bites, though. Keep it up, interested in your other work now!
-RB9
-RB9
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May 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You ARE a lezzy, aren't you? I'm sorry to say this wasn't much better than the last, inpsite the lack of bashing. It was still shallow and skill-less writing. You could do better.