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OoooKeeey! So... I never used to review any fic I read, but yours is something I simply must! I sought for a Solaufein/pc for so long, sice they are somewath rare, and was so happy when I firs saw the parring of yours, but now... You know, I'm from Eu, and my mother tongue is veeery different from english, and my English grammar is far from the best too, but even I see, that your spelling and grammar sucks. Not only in the "I don't speak english" style, but you are careless too. How can you put a fic on the net with sentences like "I went to go..." in it? Have you read this before uploading? Most of the caracters are out of caracter. Can you imagine, that I'm-Fresh-From-Underdark-And-I-Think-Philosophy-And-Poetry-Rules-Above-All-Solaufein would ever say "that blonde idiot" about Aerie? And you are inconsistent too. First you try to write from Solaufein's POV in first person, then you change to 3rd person wihout any warning, and this is pretty confusing.Please, next time read it trough, or find someone who would do it for you before you upload anything, because many other people thinks the same as I, about your fic, just they don't write review for you...

It's good, you should keep going =^^=

Heh, I liked chapter four very much. Very nice. ;)

Heh, that was awesome. you should write more. and have Trihin watch the other guy this time.. and maybe have him be caught. *evil grin*

I love it! I'm just playing my own Solafein romance in BGII and it's left me craving fanfiction. I can't wait to see how you play this out :)

Well, I certinally can't blame Trinin for being annoyed over those girlies. *rolls eyes* Females are icky! Dunno how I can stand myself! I do like what you have, however the narration is confusing at the moment. It seems to slip between first and third person narration. Just clear that up a bit and we'll have a nice smut fic in our hands! *huggles*

Where's the story? I wanna read it.