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by fayzalmoonbeam

person abra
schedule February 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I was so sure I reviewed your story. Sorry to be late.

Excellent story. I love seeing Hillary as Lara's "plaything".

One thing though, you should repost the story in the Movies section, because it only has a few paragraphs there. It might have happened when the site was down a while ago.