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January 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
plz update this !!!!!!
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April 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
uhh did anybody notice that....Taki and Kai's kids....have the same names?(just read Taki's dream) and Maxi?! WTF?! i mean it's not a bad thing....just kinda....unexpected....that somthing else how many times is Mitsu gonna be knocked pushed pulled or thrown into a hot spring? Is that like some kinda inside joke? and also what about Tojo? he like....had any worth while role....he shoulda atleast stared in 2 chap.s(but that's jus my oppinion)
"Semper Fi"
"Semper Fi"
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April 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
SHIT! Didn't notice that. I fixy when I get time! Should be fixed bofore the end of today.
Thanx for pointing that out!
Thanx for pointing that out!
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April 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This started off hot and ended up a good story.
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March 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I cant stop reading this because its so good and I like it so much. I read this fic over and over again everytime i come to this webpage. U did a good job and I respect that :)
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March 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hi,
Great story. You know, it's always hard to make fight scenes in SC fanfics without either killing a character or making them immortal. I'll be looking out for updates.
Anyway, thanks for your review of my work.
Great story. You know, it's always hard to make fight scenes in SC fanfics without either killing a character or making them immortal. I'll be looking out for updates.
Anyway, thanks for your review of my work.
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February 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Like I promised....I actually found it pretty interesting *head hurts from too much reading* gogo Taki...Yea :)
Sorry didn't get to part 2. You've got talent. 1 <3 'tYM'
Sorry didn't get to part 2. You've got talent. 1 <3 'tYM'
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February 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Cool fic. I hope Taki has twins!
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February 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey this chapter was better than the last one. I liked the part where they were attacked by assasins great scene there. Good work.
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February 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey this was good a story with actual content. And Taki being my favorite character helps to. It good i hope you write more SC stories.