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January 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Dude, I kinda hate to ask this but do you want a beta? I'm sorry it's just that the spelling errors and major gramatical errors are severly bugging me. It's makes it incredibly difficult to read this story and because of that I can't tell if I really enjoy it. If I can correct it then maybe you won't receive any more reveiws like this. Please reply. my e-mail address is rageofinferno@earthlink.net. Please, I really wanna see where this is going.
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December 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
nice story
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July 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Heard this story by a friend. She likes evil sora >:D and so do I, but hey, I really wonder ho would Riku react about the babTHINTHINK* I'm adding this story in my favorites. keep up the good work and I'l be waiting for the next chapter^_^
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May 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great story!!! Luv it! The ending was very surprising. Can't wait until the next chapter
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April 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OMFG!ur sur story is so awesome! i love the fact that Sora is evil hehe. I'm not a kairi fan anyway i really don't think she should play the boys like she does...but you should continue!! have Riku and Sora get together heheeh. Being now sor off offically single *winks*
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April 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
it was wonderful. hope to more soon please.! Thxs!
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March 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
jus wanted to let u know that i luv the story so far!! keep writing please. Thxs!!!
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February 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
...I LOVE YOW STORY!!!!! (wants a Riku and Sora plushy so bad and is on the verge of pouncing the writer) MMMM...yehaaa....
no, seriously,ove ove it so far. It's really good, anrealreally wanna see some more action. Update, please! You rock my world!!!!
no, seriously,ove ove it so far. It's really good, anrealreally wanna see some more action. Update, please! You rock my world!!!!
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February 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
aw come on! talk about being mean! and it was just gettin to the good part *wink wink* lol. well, i like it so far so hurry up and update already!
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February 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
ooohhhhhh.... sexy! arrogant riku. that bastard thinks he can just take oh so sweet sora like that! how dare he! how dare he not do it again!! and again and again!!!