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I like your story so far, and I can't wait till I can read the finished product. But it could have been better if you hadn't decided to add in the Zelda rape scenes -just because you don't like her-. Honestly, character bashing (albeit in a different form) is pretty childish, especially since the vast majority of the people who don't like Zelda have no real reason for doing so, besides stuff like "omg she made link go on dees quests" even though he AGREED and she DIDN'T FORCE HIM TO. It's better to just write a story without sullying it with certain opinions that will alienate readers. Still, like I said, your story's coming along nicely and I hope you update soon.

I'll be very blunt, I swore quite loudly when I got to the last chapter of this. PUT MORE UP! *sorry, had to* This story is excellent! I like the way link is spiralling out of control... to be totaly honest, I liked the goodie-two-shoes Zelda getting the crap beatten out of her, too... stupid never-ending quest giving little... *ahem* Anyway, very good story, characters are all great, and have depth and feelings and such. Keep up the good work, and I await the next chapter with baited breath.

Heh. ^^ Remember, most people around here don't want to review, they just want to read porn. Try looking at the hit count instead.


Great story, though. Even if the chapters are pretty short.

hehe! =) nice story! continue please!

Badass man I never would have pictured Link as evil

Dude this is an awesome story and i mean it but still I wish there was more cuz I read all fourteen chapters

My friend James told me to read your stroy and man I gotta say that it's F'ing awesome, do you plan on writing some Mario fanfics?

Well, its an interesting idea, and the writing style isn't bad. It'll be interesting finding out who Link ends up with. Please update.

Ahhhhhh! If you don't finish this fic, I will hunt you down and make you! Just kidding. No, seriously, I hate it when writers just stop updating chapters on such good stories. I really think that you should continue what you are doing and spur Link's adventure on. I like the blood and gore, cause you know it's not really something you see on the game. I also find it amusing that Linky always has some sort of mental monster to wrestle with. It keeps him from being perfect, which at first he seems to be. Please keep writing!

Caranril Linedhel

Hey, lookie! I'm leaving a review for you!! lol. Well, you were ever so kind to leav one one after reading my story, and I saw it nice enough to tell you that I loved your story. Though, being nice I gotta tell you that you have alot of grammer errors.. and you scream out to the Godesses to many times. Nayru's, Din's, and Farore's ears must hurt by now, lol. But the story has been really good with alot of twists. Make more chapters!!! >.< Oh... and read my new stuff ^_^