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November 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
5/10 only for the fact that its pwp but -10/10 since its a yuri. -undetermined number/10 since its incest. Sorry dude/dudette. I hate like yuris and I like incest fics even less. Don't get it twisted though. I'll give you props for making a PWP. Its just that you should've added a dude in to make it a 3some, thats all.
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February 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great!!!
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October 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yummy! Encore! With more kinkyness ^^
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September 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
(I'm too lazy to log in.)
Umm... wow... I hope my sister and I are never that close...
Umm... wow... I hope my sister and I are never that close...
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January 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This would be a lot better if you would just fix the spelling errors; there's too many of them. It also needs to be longer and more true to the context. What I mean is that you use modern language for using something old. You make Sophitia say, "Tis" but then you say that she took off her sister's "shirt" which really doesn't fit. Otherwise, this was pretty good.
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January 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Tough decision. I REALLY love yuri fics, but I'm no PWP fan ... I'd give it a 4/5, I could easily go up to 5/5 if it were just a bit longer and more detailed, especially plot-wise. All in all, a really nice short. Personal thumbs up from me.
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January 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This has potential and can easily be better. Not that I am disgusted by porn without plot but it could use a little work. 6/10