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BEST STORY EVUH!!!!

There are a million stories on this site ive probaly read 999,999 of them,and reviewed them also but i have to say that your story was enthrolling. There was a great plot to it but there is a couple of things i wished you could have changed. Like sonic going for sally instead of tails. Also why couldn't you have put knukles in this story? Well with all that said i would have to give that story a 8.5 out of 10.
respectfully,
Mr.D

Nice concept, and nice writing. However, I had a hard time suspending my disbelief at first -- one just doesn't think of kids as being capable of enjoying sex in that way. (Of course, some children become sexually mature earlier than others, the physical contact might still be pleasurable, and if nothing else, it would be an interesting "game"... But still, it's not something that is usually considered in our culture.) The cultural and biological notes in the later chapters helped clear that up to a certain extent, but I still have a hard time believing a 5-year-old Tails could have an orgasm...

this is a very good story if u ever think about it why dont u make a story where sonic and sally's kids(yes plural) go hunting for tribes that have dissapeared i would deffintliy read it even if no one else does!

Hey man.....im sorry but i thought my friend Corey Jones said that he had wrote the story.
I thought that he was the writer and he must of copied the story off of you. If i cause a vain to pop in your head im sorry.
But read some of my stories man, youll like them.