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January 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really liked this, especially the different spin you put on the story. (Well duh since it's AU *lol*) Anywho, I really hope you make a sequel. Pretty please with sugar on top? ^_^
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August 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well.. It was original, but very OOC.. I know, you proolly hadn't played it but you know.. -coughc- Um..
It made Raziel rather femme-like.. I mean a ssoldier back in those days wouldn't cry over stuff like that, espeically with how well he fights.. Um.. IIt was a good story, i read it all the way through, but it was so dramatically 'yaoi'.. I mean i know the Romians used heterosexuals in there army so when their love dies, revenge is emmitent, but this was just like he found the easy way out with his vampiric lover who will save him from it all.. Not very Kain-ish.. um.. But It would be a great Vampire Hunter D story!
I really don't know how to put it.. Not a flame, just a kinda 'What is this?' thingy in a positive light. -paws and gives a chocolate chip cookie for trying- Take care, your writting is still lovely and perfectly composed with detailing. I wasn't at all confused by the actions he made, just the change of personality..
It made Raziel rather femme-like.. I mean a ssoldier back in those days wouldn't cry over stuff like that, espeically with how well he fights.. Um.. IIt was a good story, i read it all the way through, but it was so dramatically 'yaoi'.. I mean i know the Romians used heterosexuals in there army so when their love dies, revenge is emmitent, but this was just like he found the easy way out with his vampiric lover who will save him from it all.. Not very Kain-ish.. um.. But It would be a great Vampire Hunter D story!
I really don't know how to put it.. Not a flame, just a kinda 'What is this?' thingy in a positive light. -paws and gives a chocolate chip cookie for trying- Take care, your writting is still lovely and perfectly composed with detailing. I wasn't at all confused by the actions he made, just the change of personality..
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July 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This fic was fantastic! Actually, it was so great, that I think it would work greatly as an original story, if you change the names of the places and characters and make it longer :)
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June 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I think you are doing a really good job so far. I like the approach you are taking with Kain and Raziel's relationship. It's no big deal messing around with facts and data, because if everybodies' stories were so alike, they would be boring!
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May 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
THat has to be one of the best LoK fic i have ever read Honestly its just brilliant VER VERY VEYR well done would love to read more if there is any but Yes all up and exellant fic... Wording writing everything just stunning ^_^ keep up the wonderfull work
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January 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey, please sequal? -whimper, beg-
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December 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I WANT SEQUEL!!!!! It was terrific and divine!!! You write really great ^^ "...sequel! sequel! sequel!..." :]
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October 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
yep....good stuff.....good stuff
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October 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This was excellent and so IC. I love the ending. It's rare to find happy fics in this fandom, so I read all I can, though I am fairly new to the fandom (if you know of any good yaoi sites with this pairing, I'd love to hear them). I like how you have Raziel denying it all until the very end.
Is there any images of or Raziel before he's turned into a vampire? Or is he always that pale with black lips?
I hope you do write a sequel, even if it's just a tiny oneshot.
Is there any images of or Raziel before he's turned into a vampire? Or is he always that pale with black lips?
I hope you do write a sequel, even if it's just a tiny oneshot.
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July 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
the ending made me cry. coulcould zephon be SO mean? but stories that make you cry are a lot better than stories that make you laugh, from my pov anyway. i like many others have played all of the games, and it was fantastically written none-the-less. during all of the fighting, i just kept wondering, were they just suppose to die since they couldn't hurt Raziel? but it was great! it made me cry!